Topic: Rant
Lantz's photo
Sat 05/05/07 11:47 PM
A darkness unclean, I slip to your world unseen. Ruthless and numb I
take what I need. Cold and black I lay my seed.

A philosopher and mystic I watch and wait. I see your flaws and
annihilate. Weak and slow you live your life, I kill just for spite

At home in trails and on the streets there is no place to retreat. I'll
wrap you in my warm embrace and let you scream in my face. But no one
hears a shadow scream they think it is just a dream.

A solitary being I travel alone. My mind is a maze of dark and snow. To
stay alive I hurt myself on trails of mud to ink of blood.

No physical form is there for me I am just, arbitrary....

So when you feel a cold dark chill don't turn or run or else I'll
kill...

no photo
Sun 05/06/07 01:03 AM
You REALLY remind me of someone else I met here,,,in your words,,THAT
IS,,and THATS not really GOOD.
But to hear words of anger and to speak of ending life,,,,its dark ,
cold, bold, and deep,,,but,,yet,,,very weak!:heart:

Jess642's photo
Sun 05/06/07 01:08 AM
Intense.

LAMom's photo
Sun 05/06/07 01:12 AM
Powerful

Lantz's photo
Sun 05/06/07 10:37 AM
Actually this isn't a rant at all...

I am a member of a website called "Fearnet.com" where it is a community
of a bunch of horror genera buffs. In all of the profiles there are
bio's that tell a lot about the people involved.

On the website you have a species and a place of origin and the poem
here that I started in this thread is my Bio. I made myself a specific
creature and gave myself a place of birth and I thought that a good bio
was in need.

Check out the website sometime, it is Fearnet.com...
My account name is HadajiSama...

So I really don't want to kill people I just like looking through the
eyes of the character I created and try to give him motivations and
ambitions

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 05/06/07 04:19 PM
Hummmmm Lantz, thank you so much for the explanttion. For the first time
I read this being honest I had no way to express the feelings it gave
off intense was one for sure powerful, deep & dark were some of the
others and a bit scary. Whew.....okay now I understand more the meaning
of such deep dark words. I myself love the horror movies and books. But
at times if you don't know were one is coming from with there words it
does make you wonder what state of mind they are in. It is very good
writing, and thanks for explaining were it was coming from.:smile:

Morena350's photo
Sun 05/06/07 08:45 PM
so deep!!:heart:

Hotchikita's photo
Sun 05/06/07 08:49 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou really good