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A darkness unclean, I slip to your world unseen. Ruthless and numb I
take what I need. Cold and black I lay my seed. A philosopher and mystic I watch and wait. I see your flaws and annihilate. Weak and slow you live your life, I kill just for spite At home in trails and on the streets there is no place to retreat. I'll wrap you in my warm embrace and let you scream in my face. But no one hears a shadow scream they think it is just a dream. A solitary being I travel alone. My mind is a maze of dark and snow. To stay alive I hurt myself on trails of mud to ink of blood. No physical form is there for me I am just, arbitrary.... So when you feel a cold dark chill don't turn or run or else I'll kill... |
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You REALLY remind me of someone else I met here,,,in your words,,THAT
IS,,and THATS not really GOOD. But to hear words of anger and to speak of ending life,,,,its dark , cold, bold, and deep,,,but,,yet,,,very weak! ![]() |
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Intense.
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Powerful
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Actually this isn't a rant at all...
I am a member of a website called "Fearnet.com" where it is a community of a bunch of horror genera buffs. In all of the profiles there are bio's that tell a lot about the people involved. On the website you have a species and a place of origin and the poem here that I started in this thread is my Bio. I made myself a specific creature and gave myself a place of birth and I thought that a good bio was in need. Check out the website sometime, it is Fearnet.com... My account name is HadajiSama... So I really don't want to kill people I just like looking through the eyes of the character I created and try to give him motivations and ambitions |
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Hummmmm Lantz, thank you so much for the explanttion. For the first time
I read this being honest I had no way to express the feelings it gave off intense was one for sure powerful, deep & dark were some of the others and a bit scary. Whew.....okay now I understand more the meaning of such deep dark words. I myself love the horror movies and books. But at times if you don't know were one is coming from with there words it does make you wonder what state of mind they are in. It is very good writing, and thanks for explaining were it was coming from. ![]() |
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so deep!!
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