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LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 03/31/09 08:29 PM
Upon my table lay a box Beautiful in its form Aged with perfection Scent of long ago Handed down thru time Her Soul to mine Within this box Lay tarnished and worn A once brilliant display of hope Polished years ago Set forth to bring hope Polished with faith In this box Lays life I opened the box today Pulled from its contents Silver Worn and battered In my hands Lay life. Hopes of long since past Treasures of Treasures Cast long ago Rusting in thy Soul With tools in hand I take a pause Looking back in time Reminiscing Of a Different kind Soul dancing, hearts laughing Spirits guiding thy path Today I lay rest of all the bad Today I Polished I Polished I Breathe

La_Boricua_Blanca Joined Fri 08/08/08 Posts: 9	Tue 03/31/09 09:01 PM
pretty

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Tue 03/31/09 09:30 PM
Such a beautiful write.Much Luv & Godspeed!Cy"Steven"

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 03/31/09 09:50 PM
because you brighten up so many cloudy days, I just wanted to say, Thank You LA Mom! Your write just inspired this: sometimes the real beauty is found behind the makeup only most men never have the courage to let woman know it is there, where we should see it Because most men, live tangible never endulging to look for what they cannot see because most woman, never step outside their compacts

DaveyB Joined Wed 10/10/07 Posts: 18786	Wed 04/01/09 09:00 AM
Wonderful images in there thanks.

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Wed 04/01/09 09:06 AM


pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 04/01/09 09:24 AM
Wonderful write Denise...just got done going through my mom's belongings and polished up and cleaned what I brought home. Thinking happy memories...hugs to you and yours.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 04/02/09 09:52 AM
pretty Thank you,, and welcome to our Home ((( Steven )))) Much love to you ((( MzEm )))) ((( Pam ))) To our Memories ((( David )))) ((( J ))) For being you Ohhhhhhhhhhhh Beautiful you

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Fri 04/03/09 09:55 AM
Awwwwwwwwww reminds me when I look back within the trunk that holds my grandmothers and mothers possessions of many years ago as the jewelry she wore with the earrings that sparkle with all the colors. Sweet write

tanyaann Joined Mon 12/03/07 Posts: 32220	Fri 04/03/09 09:57 AM


MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 04/03/09 09:58 AM
Upon my table lay a box Beautiful in its form Aged with perfection Scent of long ago Handed down thru time Her Soul to mine Within this box Lay tarnished and worn A once brilliant display of hope Polished years ago Set forth to bring hope Polished with faith In this box Lays life I opened the box today Pulled from its contents Silver Worn and battered In my hands Lay life. Hopes of long since past Treasures of Treasures Cast long ago Rusting in thy Soul With tools in hand I take a pause Looking back in time Reminiscing Of a Different kind Soul dancing, hearts laughing Spirits guiding thy path Today I lay rest of all the bad Today I Polished I Polished I Breathe nice

carold Joined Sun 03/23/08 Posts: 26747	Fri 04/03/09 10:27 AM Edited by carold on Fri 04/03/09 10:28 AM
I lay rest to all the bad Today :) Wonderul write :)

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 04/03/09 10:52 AM
What a lovely write...so precious and heartfelt!

JasonSB123 Joined Tue 01/06/09 Posts: 65	Fri 04/03/09 12:36 PM
Indeed, the letting go brings a beautiful Peace Polishing or being polished Breathe easy Lady Thanks!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 04/03/09 12:41 PM
Thank you all,,, My rags are dusty my soul is full

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 04/03/09 01:24 PM
Thank you all,,, My rags are dusty my soul is full Yes...your Soul is full....of Love and Presence....