Topic: You are my friend
DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 10:29 AM
Edited by DaveyB on Sun 03/29/09 10:32 AM
Don't beat around the bush
just ask for what you want.
Don't waste my time with platitudes
or words the tease and taunt

I'm not a toy or plaything
I am your loving friend
But if things continue as they are
this will be our final end.

You know me well enough,
there's nothing I can't forgive
But before I can even begin that
I have to know exactly what it is.

Our friendship has grown and lasted
through good times and the rough.
Don't kill it now with hidden truths
I'll just say I've had enough.

...

You are my friend,
I love you still.
But don't test me now
cause I've had my fill.

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Please know that while there are events in my life digging up memories, this poem is about those memories and not anything happening now. It is also a conglomeration of past events both distant and recent and not just one.

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/29/09 10:31 AM

Don't beat around the bush
just ask for what you want.
Don't waste my time with platitudes
or words the tease and taunt

I'm not a toy or plaything
I am your loving friend
But if things continue as they are
this will be our final end.

You know me well enough,
there's nothing I can't forgive
But before I can even begin that
I have to know just what it is.

Our friendship has grown and lasted
through good times and the rough.
Don't kill it now with hidden truths
I'll just say I've had enough.

...

You are my friend,
I love you still.
But don't test me now
cause I've had my fill.

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Please know that while there are events in my life digging up memories, this poem is about those memories and not anything happening now. It is also a conglomeration of past events both distant and recent and not just one.
:thumbsup: good job:thumbsup:

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 12:18 PM
Thanks MM :smile:

Sharris's photo
Sun 03/29/09 01:43 PM

Don't beat around the bush
just ask for what you want.
Don't waste my time with platitudes
or words the tease and taunt

I'm not a toy or plaything
I am your loving friend
But if things continue as they are
this will be our final end.

You know me well enough,
there's nothing I can't forgive
But before I can even begin that
I have to know exactly what it is.

Our friendship has grown and lasted
through good times and the rough.
Don't kill it now with hidden truths
I'll just say I've had enough.

...

You are my friend,
I love you still.
But don't test me now
cause I've had my fill.

------------------------------
Please know that while there are events in my life digging up memories, this poem is about those memories and not anything happening now. It is also a conglomeration of past events both distant and recent and not just one.


a disclaimer should not be necessary..your thoughts are intense and speaks of a cherished and deep love, be it friendship or which ever veil you are pulling aside. Thank you for sharing with us..

MirrorMirror's photo
Sun 03/29/09 01:59 PM

Thanks MM :smile:
bigsmile You're welcomeflowerforyou

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 02:19 PM

a disclaimer should not be necessary..your thoughts are intense and speaks of a cherished and deep love, be it friendship or which ever veil you are pulling aside. Thank you for sharing with us..


It is my very distinct privilege and honor to share with so many talented people on this board.

Perhaps the disclaimer should not be needed, however my friends tend to know that I normally only write in the present. I wouldn't want any of them to think I was currently in distress over this. More importantly, I wouldn't want anyone to mistakenly construe this to be about them and believe that our friendship was in peril.


puggirl7's photo
Sun 03/29/09 02:20 PM
flowerforyou good poem,i like how you express your feelings!it is so very true about friendship!nicely put!

dawnyhi's photo
Sun 03/29/09 02:22 PM
i like it and being a friend is a great honor and should not be tested harmed or taken for granted... it does not cost anything and you dont need to lose anything you build each other up and not tear each other down... using tack and understanding and patience...

AngelLight's photo
Sun 03/29/09 03:11 PM
Yes, open and honest communication is so integral to any loving relationship flowerforyou

Ty for sharing your write...

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 03:18 PM

flowerforyou good poem,i like how you express your feelings!it is so very true about friendship!nicely put!


Thank you :smile:

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 03:19 PM

i like it and being a friend is a great honor and should not be tested harmed or taken for granted... it does not cost anything and you dont need to lose anything you build each other up and not tear each other down... using tack and understanding and patience...


Oh so very true. Thank you for reading.

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 03:20 PM

Yes, open and honest communication is so integral to any loving relationship flowerforyou

Ty for sharing your write...


It is my pleasure to share and thank you for your response.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 03/29/09 04:44 PM
As always Dave very deep and provoking thoughts within. We do battle with our demons within and the thoughts they provoke. Very heartfelt as usual.flowers

DaveyB's photo
Sun 03/29/09 05:37 PM

As always Dave very deep and provoking thoughts within. We do battle with our demons within and the thoughts they provoke. Very heartfelt as usual.flowers


Thank you, I've been feeling a little dry lately so it was nice to find something I felt I could write about without having to go through any new trauma :wink:.

Thanks for reading and thanks for your kind words.flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 03/29/09 08:42 PM
Anytime, you know when one writes from the heart the words can't help but to touch another persons heart. bigsmile

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 03/30/09 08:45 PM
I'm so glad we've always managed talking through it all!!flowers flowers

DaveyB's photo
Mon 03/30/09 08:53 PM
Edited by DaveyB on Mon 03/30/09 08:55 PM

I'm so glad we've always managed talking through it all!!flowers flowers


Yeah me too flowers