Topic: Merlot
RawB's photo
Mon 03/16/09 10:04 AM
Your lips taste of bittersweet
I caress your face
and slide mine against your cheek

Your eyes spark fires
in darkness light the night
our lips will never tire

your salty skin
my hardened body
together wrapped in sin

twice used air
gasping for more
with gentle pulling of your hair

only two left in the world
sculpted together
like sand in the ocean forms a pearl

Hard and soft
around we gravitate
finding ourselves lost

Drinking you
like life force
rejuvenated by the dew

forever us
against the times
secured by trust

no need for cheap lines
lovers wrapped in silk
stimulated by our minds

together in bliss
now come here lover
and lets consecrate this

©2009March By: Roberto Loera





d4tc's photo
Mon 03/16/09 12:15 PM
Excellent! bigsmile

RawB's photo
Mon 03/16/09 05:16 PM

Excellent! bigsmile
Thank you, I'm glad you liked drinks

s1owhand's photo
Mon 03/16/09 07:06 PM
:thumbsup:

no photo
Mon 03/16/09 07:08 PM
Awesome...flowerforyou

kirk443's photo
Mon 03/16/09 07:27 PM
nice use of description:thumbsup: reading it made me imagine like I was in the presence of a nice gal and imagining her bittersweet lips and salty body.

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 03/17/09 12:23 PM
ooh I like this flowerforyou


I haven't been around much lately ... nice to read you and welcome RawB flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 03/17/09 06:50 PM
really good write

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/17/09 07:23 PM
Most excellent warming effects and visualsflowerforyou


no photo
Wed 03/18/09 05:25 PM
sensual feelings so beautifully expressed...loved it!!

RawB's photo
Sat 03/21/09 10:15 PM
Thank you all very much for your comments =)

AngelLight's photo
Sun 03/22/09 07:25 AM
Great job ~ the entire write ~ and

"no need for cheap lines
lovers wrapped in silk
stimulated by our minds" is a fantastic verse flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/22/09 11:43 AM
Dude - that was hott.

Turned me on a little - I love sexy poetry.

RawB's photo
Wed 03/25/09 06:56 AM
I'm so glad that you all dropped in and shared with me, thank you all for your comments blushing smitten you all are too kind