Topic: Pools of Blue
BLUEEYEDSOUL69's photo
Sun 03/15/09 10:09 PM
I close my eyes and I can see
your pain filled beautiful eyes looking into me
they hold so much strife and pain
so much lost alas, but so much gained
I am captivated so completely
I want to swim in their depths
to lose myself in that sea of blue
diving to the deepest part
and let the waves caress my hungry soul
take me all the way down
as far as I dare go...just let me drown;
in those intense pools of blue
the windows of all that is true
take me, take me, is all I can think
when your waves crash into me
take me now to the deep end
and I will go, my best and most trusted friend
I feel you; I need you
How they take me to the brink
of ecstasy
of pain
of love
All that is within those eyes of the sea
the sky
the world
everytime they look at me..

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Sun 03/15/09 10:17 PM
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very nice.

Jimmy59's photo
Sun 03/15/09 10:24 PM
Your poem is put together very well true feeling make the thoughts blend into wonderful words.
Brovo.......:thumbsup: winking






mekikis's photo
Sun 03/15/09 10:35 PM
Very well said... Very nice.:smile: