Topic: Pools of Blue | |
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I close my eyes and I can see
your pain filled beautiful eyes looking into me they hold so much strife and pain so much lost alas, but so much gained I am captivated so completely I want to swim in their depths to lose myself in that sea of blue diving to the deepest part and let the waves caress my hungry soul take me all the way down as far as I dare go...just let me drown; in those intense pools of blue the windows of all that is true take me, take me, is all I can think when your waves crash into me take me now to the deep end and I will go, my best and most trusted friend I feel you; I need you How they take me to the brink of ecstasy of pain of love All that is within those eyes of the sea the sky the world everytime they look at me.. |
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very nice. |
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Your poem is put together very well true feeling make the thoughts blend into wonderful words.
Brovo....... |
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Very well said... Very nice.
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