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“Behind the Veil”
Growing up we looked forward to the future ahead. We planned all the little details in our head. Down to how many kids and where we want to live. The house we dream of right down to the car we drive. We played with our friends in a world of pretend. Never did we realize how much we didn’t comprehend. Seemed like so much fun we where so sure what life was about. So why in the world would we have any doubt? I mean we have our life planned down to a tee. At least back then we all thought we could see. As time went on we made it through our teenage years. Still it seems as if our life is great still no fears. Only thing now we have added to our dreams. Where we will go to college and our career it seems. Now you know we have plans for all that money. And the one we will marry and always call honey. Our heads are not in the clouds for you will see. We will sail through High School and get our college degree. Within our minds we’ve made that list and it is there to get. You will see nothing will make us quit. You know growing up was not as easy as we thought. Even school at times left us distraught. Wondering what happen to our beautiful dream. As we feel deep within this need to scream. When we were young it seems we had the world by the tail. Our parents told us to come out from behind the veil. It never made sense to us back then for we could only see. The world we had created and never realized how it would be. K.L.M 3/14/2009 |
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Very Nice Read |
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Good one! AMEN!!
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Eternally true through all the generations of mankind.Excellent write.Godspeed!Cy
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Very well put!
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I don't think any one could have said it better then this poem does. Great poem
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Ah..."the best laid plans..."
"Life is what happens to you while your busy making other plans" "You construct the world around you by the thoughts you think," Buddha Most insightful!
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Wow I see this one was revived thank you all for reading my words. And yes Jason it seems our plans to get changed while we are busy along the way or could it be we fail to see what others see.
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Great Write!
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Ty for your write
I am reminded of this thought...
"Your life is shaped by the ends you live for. You are made in the image of what you desire." Thomas Merton Thoughts in Solitude |
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Great write ((Kristi))
and OH! how so true!
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Ty for your write I am reminded of this thought...
"Your life is shaped by the ends you live for. You are made in the image of what you desire." Thomas Merton Thoughts in Solitude Angel your like a breath of fresh air thank you for your words. tanyaann thank you very much for reading
Silveradogal your words are well appreciated as well and thank you for your friendship as well
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No, thank you for writing great things for us to enjoy. Please write more!
Thank YOU for being MY friend.
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No, thank you for writing great things for us to enjoy. Please write more!
Thank YOU for being MY friend.
Lol ya know lunch is going to truly be and enjoyment come Wednesday
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Yes ma'am, it sure is. I can hardly wait! We are going to have fun I know.
No, thank you for writing great things for us to enjoy. Please write more!
Thank YOU for being MY friend.
Lol ya know lunch is going to truly be and enjoyment come Wednesday
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Very nice!
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Beautiful! Wonderful write...
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“Behind the Veil” Growing up we looked forward to the future ahead. We planned all the little details in our head. Down to how many kids and where we want to live. The house we dream of right down to the car we drive. We played with our friends in a world of pretend. Never did we realize how much we didn’t comprehend. Seemed like so much fun we where so sure what life was about. So why in the world would we have any doubt? I mean we have our life planned down to a tee. At least back then we all thought we could see. As time went on we made it through our teenage years. Still it seems as if our life is great still no fears. Only thing now we have added to our dreams. Where we will go to college and our career it seems. Now you know we have plans for all that money. And the one we will marry and always call honey. Our heads are not in the clouds for you will see. We will sail through High School and get our college degree. Within our minds we’ve made that list and it is there to get. You will see nothing will make us quit. You know growing up was not as easy as we thought. Even school at times left us distraught. Wondering what happen to our beautiful dream. As we feel deep within this need to scream. When we were young it seems we had the world by the tail. Our parents told us to come out from behind the veil. It never made sense to us back then for we could only see. The world we had created and never realized how it would be. K.L.M 3/14/2009 nice
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