Topic: The Call of a Child
Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 03/09/09 08:34 AM
Knock on the door
Words exchanged
I only catch, “new neighbor”
And hungry munchkin.

Brain takes a vacation
As I think of the courage
Needed to approach a stranger
To stop your child’s hunger pangs.

I can hear him fussing
As she tries to calm him in the doorway.
Brain come back, work!
Which child do I hear the loudest?

Peanut Butter on a spoon
To tide ‘im over
During the time it takes
To build a proper PB-n-J sammich-n-pull a juice pouch from the fridge.

The thought of an Elder dying
Prompts my thoughts to flow
Out of my fingers
So a heart facing this loss can read and know.

The next day,
Cool air wafts over my hand
And a quiet, “thank you”
Is heard in my brain.

Her age in earth years is over 80.
Though she’s been here on this plane a while -
Me, I still hear,
The "call of a child".

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Mon 03/09/09 08:35 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou very nice read...

tanyaann's photo
Mon 03/09/09 08:42 AM
Oh my! Haunting Write! Definately Good! flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/09/09 08:45 AM
*Reply** thinking of a reply with this huge lump in my throat,, Brought me to my Knees,, Ohhhh Ms Wench
Beautiful you,,,,, :heart:

DaveyB's photo
Mon 03/09/09 09:39 AM
Very nice. Required a very deep breath and a sigh after reading.

Sharris's photo
Mon 03/09/09 01:50 PM

Knock on the door
Words exchanged
I only catch, “new neighbor”
And hungry munchkin.

Brain takes a vacation
As I think of the courage
Needed to approach a stranger
To stop your child’s hunger pangs.

I can hear him fussing
As she tries to calm him in the doorway.
Brain come back, work!
Which child do I hear the loudest?

Peanut Butter on a spoon
To tide ‘im over
During the time it takes
To build a proper PB-n-J sammich-n-pull a juice pouch from the fridge.

The thought of an Elder dying
Prompts my thoughts to flow
Out of my fingers
So a heart facing this loss can read and know.

The next day,
Cool air wafts over my hand
And a quiet, “thank you”
Is heard in my brain.

Her age in earth years is over 80.
Though she’s been here on this plane a while -
Me, I still hear,
The "call of a child".

a paraphrase
"when you've done it to the least of these , you have done it unto me"
a still small voice..such thanksgiving, tenderness

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Tue 03/10/09 06:19 AM
This makes a person stop to think of thr plights of many who often times we fail to reach out to for various reasons. One act of kindness sometimes can make all the differfence.

Beautiful piece, thanks for sharing flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 03/10/09 06:28 AM
Amazing writeflowerforyou flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Tue 03/10/09 06:49 AM
awesome as always

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 03/10/09 08:15 AM
Thank you for a beautiful share.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 03/10/09 08:16 AM
:heart:

kc0003's photo
Tue 03/10/09 08:38 AM
Wonderful piece

Touching and thought provoking.

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/10/09 09:55 AM
OMG!!!tears tears

I love my grandma!!!:heart:

This is amazing Lady!flowers