Topic: Little soldier
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Wed 05/02/07 10:07 AM

I miss being young and small...
not being able to see over that wall..
Not unless you picked me up,
and showed me what it was like...
I miss being young and small,
remembering when we'd go play ball..

I miss all those days...
I spent when I'd just play...
Remembering just you and me, just living happy as two can be..
even though there was more than three...just now It's you and me...

I miss you Dad...
I miss all the good times we had...
and even though it got pretty bad...
I'm really missing you Dad...

Cause I'm missing you Dad...
There's not a time where I'm not really glad...
There's not a time where I'm not really sad..
Because I'm missing my Dad...

I miss the times we'd share...
No one understands me when I say I don't care...
Cause to me, there wasn't a second to spare...
Just a boy living in his own dreams..

Nothings ever as it seems
A vague past into desperate gleams..
Deep etches burnt within these seams...
Of a young boy caught up inside of his dreams..

I miss you Dad...
I miss all the good times we had...
and even though it got pretty bad...
I'm really missing you Dad...

Cause I'm missing you Dad...
There's not a time where I'm not really glad...
There's not a time where I'm not really sad..
Because I'm missing my Dad...



MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 05/02/07 10:48 AM
Beautiful...flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/02/07 11:38 AM
{{{{{{{Ahalo}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

Beautiful Indeed,,, :heart: brokenheart :heart:

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Wed 05/02/07 11:44 AM
thanx guys. It's a song I'm working on right now. It was pretty cool
because as the words were comin into my mind, there was already a melody
playing in the background. Hopefully it wasn't something I've heard b4
that I was remembering tho, cuz it would suck to realize I just put
someone else's background music on my song. Sometimes that happens to
people and they don't even realize it.

sry to seem like such a tear jerker with my writings, I guess I just
have more inspiration and motive to write when I'm thinking of those
types of things. I guess thats usually why I come off as a weird guy,
but hey, I like being weird! lol

thanx 4 your thoughts, take care

LAMom's photo
Wed 05/02/07 11:46 AM
Ahalo,, You are far from Wierd,,, You write from you Soul and it is so
Beautiful to see,,, flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 05/03/07 10:34 AM
Ohhh AhaloAskewed never think of yourself as weird this was Awesome I
Loved it. bigsmile Made me think of my dad that I miss so much thank
you for your words touched my heart as they grabbed onto my
soul!flowerforyou bigsmile

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Thu 05/03/07 01:06 PM
Thanx, I'm really glad you liked it. =]