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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Fri 03/06/09 10:34 AM
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Inspired by sami's "a challenge"
The beauty she is She does not see. The heart she has Continues to beat. Pulsing to the rhythms She’s beginning to discover. Her outer beauty to her eyes Will remain undercover. She is one Who causes admiring glances. Outer skin glowing From her inner light. She’s so very much more Revealed in little flashes. Her journey to herself Documented in poetic splashes. |
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Inspired by sami's "a challenge" The beauty she is She does not see. The heart she has Continues to beat. Pulsing to the rhythms She’s beginning to discover. Her outer beauty to her eyes Will remain undercover. She is one Who causes admiring glances. Outer skin glowing From her inner light. She’s so very much more Revealed in little flashes. Her journey to herself Documented in poetic splashes.  nice
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I like that. You have managed to capture the image of a genuine woman.
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Excellent Write
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Wow I like this. Sounds like a very mysterious woman. Very nice.
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That was wonderful
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loved every word of this, truly inspired.
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Wenchie, have I ever told you I regard you as Poet Laureate to the Mingle Clan? Your poems always touches the very depths of those who read them. Thank you for sharing your tomes with us.Hugs.
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 thanks, y'all.....
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that was nice...i hope she sees it as well
 oh and you better make yourself available next week...  |
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>clapping<
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that was nice...i hope she sees it as well oh and you better make yourself available next week... |
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that was nice...i hope she sees it as well oh and you better make yourself available next week... thats when i get there.... 
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Inspired by sami's "a challenge" The beauty she is She does not see. The heart she has Continues to beat. Pulsing to the rhythms She’s beginning to discover. Her outer beauty to her eyes Will remain undercover. She is one Who causes admiring glances. Outer skin glowing From her inner light. She’s so very much more Revealed in little flashes. Her journey to herself Documented in poetic splashes. This is beautifully written. It's sparse yet descriptive and paints a lovely picture~
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