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Topic: Core of a woman
flame1cutie's photo
Fri 03/06/09 10:45 PM

LAMons "deepest thoughts of a woman" Inspired me to upload this one here. Hope you enjoy it.



The core of a woman

The way she looks at you when you catch her watching you.
Her eyes mesmerize you as you walk toward her.
Her warmth flows from her body as you stand hand in hand.
Her gentle kiss tells you, You are her man.

She carries your babies, mothering your children.
Her maternal instincts kicking in, you have no worries,
she's there, the glue, the bond, holding and keeping
the family bound, tightly woven together.

She makes sure your children are well cared for.
In the middle of the night she wakes to their call,
she feeds them then gently, with a soothing voice,
sings them to sleep with a childhood lullaby.

If you are lucky enough you can watch her as she sits
with her child snuggled and protected in her arms
while in quiet comfort they both sleep.
Your gentle kiss lets her know, She is your woman.

She treasures the little things you give her,
like the heart, shaped from a wire tie.

She'll go to a baseball game with you and
when your team hits a home run she'll jump
up and yell, "TOUCH DOWN!!"

She can make a gourmet meal out of
macaroni and cheese.

She can, and sometimes will mow the lawn
She can change a flat, check the oil,
and even push you on your motorcycle
as you try to jump start it.
Laughing with you as the neighbors look on

She can even jump start your engine with
her own little Victoria Secret.

What a woman!!!
Damn you are a lucky man!!!

Emanating from her core are tendrils
which carry on the vines things such as,
Love,
Kindness,
Compassion,
Empathy,
Joy,
Peace,
and even a strong faith.

These things travel through her heart,
the place where her core resides.
It is safe from corruption.
Her heart may break but her core can never be hurt.

And at the end of the day,
all she asks, and needs, is to
hear three little words.

"I love you"







:thumbsup: Very excellent writeflowers flowers

Dragoness's photo
Fri 03/06/09 11:06 PM
Very good write, I enjoyed reading it.flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 03/07/09 04:40 AM
A very fitting tribute to W.O.M.A.N.

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Sat 03/07/09 04:57 AM


LAMons "deepest thoughts of a woman" Inspired me to upload this one here. Hope you enjoy it.



The core of a woman

The way she looks at you when you catch her watching you.
Her eyes mesmerize you as you walk toward her.
Her warmth flows from her body as you stand hand in hand.
Her gentle kiss tells you, You are her man.

She carries your babies, mothering your children.
Her maternal instincts kicking in, you have no worries,
she's there, the glue, the bond, holding and keeping
the family bound, tightly woven together.

She makes sure your children are well cared for.
In the middle of the night she wakes to their call,
she feeds them then gently, with a soothing voice,
sings them to sleep with a childhood lullaby.

If you are lucky enough you can watch her as she sits
with her child snuggled and protected in her arms
while in quiet comfort they both sleep.
Your gentle kiss lets her know, She is your woman.

She treasures the little things you give her,
like the heart, shaped from a wire tie.

She'll go to a baseball game with you and
when your team hits a home run she'll jump
up and yell, "TOUCH DOWN!!"

She can make a gourmet meal out of
macaroni and cheese.

She can, and sometimes will mow the lawn
She can change a flat, check the oil,
and even push you on your motorcycle
as you try to jump start it.
Laughing with you as the neighbors look on

She can even jump start your engine with
her own little Victoria Secret.

What a woman!!!
Damn you are a lucky man!!!

Emanating from her core are tendrils
which carry on the vines things such as,
Love,
Kindness,
Compassion,
Empathy,
Joy,
Peace,
and even a strong faith.

These things travel through her heart,
the place where her core resides.
It is safe from corruption.
Her heart may break but her core can never be hurt.

And at the end of the day,
all she asks, and needs, is to
hear three little words.

"I love you"







:thumbsup: Very excellent writeflowers flowers



Flame thank you much for your comment and for reading.

Dragon a big thanks to you also

Bonny I appreciate your stopping by and commenting

synergized's photo
Sat 03/07/09 07:50 AM
I hear all the women saying..yessssssss.yeeeeeeeees yesssssssss!
And some of the men nodding. Life is too short to do anything but appreciate every little wonder of each other!

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Sat 03/07/09 09:13 AM

I hear all the women saying..yessssssss.yeeeeeeeees yesssssssss!
And some of the men nodding. Life is too short to do anything but appreciate every little wonder of each other!


Especially as we get older. Every day for us should be lived to the fullest.

Thanks much for sharing your thoughts

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 03/07/09 10:24 AM
Definitely goes in with my favorites!

ivysmom's photo
Sat 03/07/09 12:29 PM
Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence.

no photo
Sat 03/07/09 12:56 PM

Definitely goes in with my favorites!


Thank you so much. Means alot to know you really appreciate this.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 03/07/09 12:58 PM

Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence.


It would be nice if it could help with domestic violence. You really don't want to get me started with it. I have a hard time with those who would hit a woman.

No I'm not a writer. Just a guy who likes to out into words the things I feel.

Thanks Ivy I appreciate your thoughts

5x10's photo
Sat 03/07/09 06:13 PM


Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence.


It would be nice if it could help with domestic violence. You really don't want to get me started with it. I have a hard time with those who would hit a woman.

No I'm not a writer. Just a guy who likes to out into words the things I feel.

Thanks Ivy I appreciate your thoughts


WOW...beautiful, just beautiful!!!!!

no photo
Sat 03/07/09 06:45 PM
Thank you much 5X10.

no photo
Sun 03/08/09 10:20 AM
"Her own little Victoria's Secret" - Wonderful!

Well, you know how I feel about this piece Ron, I loved it before and I still love it! :heart:

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Sun 03/08/09 11:07 AM

"Her own little Victoria's Secret" - Wonderful!

Well, you know how I feel about this piece Ron, I loved it before and I still love it! :heart:


Yeah I kinda like that line myself. lol.

I held onto it for awhile debating about posting it.

Thanks Alicia I always appreciate your kind words.flowerforyou flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Sun 03/08/09 11:39 AM
A Valentine

The heart of what matters
along the nape of her soul
reflecting the deep
completing in whole

sometimes it is good
to know what is seen
allowing a step
when pushing to breathe

it is in the heart
where a man soon knows
that all around her
is the garden she grows

She'll kiss you and need you
esteem her in tender
her joy is in giving
her love, this reminder.

Raine Les 3/8/2009

you have opened a sweet memory, thanks


no photo
Sun 03/08/09 12:43 PM

A Valentine

The heart of what matters
along the nape of her soul
reflecting the deep
completing in whole

sometimes it is good
to know what is seen
allowing a step
when pushing to breathe

it is in the heart
where a man soon knows
that all around her
is the garden she grows

She'll kiss you and need you
esteem her in tender
her joy is in giving
her love, this reminder.

Raine Les 3/8/2009

you have opened a sweet memory, thanks




Sharis this is a wonderful piece. I especially like the third stanza. Every guy should red that and appreciate the things a woman can grow in her garden. Thanks much for sharing.


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