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LAMons "deepest thoughts of a woman" Inspired me to upload this one here. Hope you enjoy it. The core of a woman The way she looks at you when you catch her watching you. Her eyes mesmerize you as you walk toward her. Her warmth flows from her body as you stand hand in hand. Her gentle kiss tells you, You are her man. She carries your babies, mothering your children. Her maternal instincts kicking in, you have no worries, she's there, the glue, the bond, holding and keeping the family bound, tightly woven together. She makes sure your children are well cared for. In the middle of the night she wakes to their call, she feeds them then gently, with a soothing voice, sings them to sleep with a childhood lullaby. If you are lucky enough you can watch her as she sits with her child snuggled and protected in her arms while in quiet comfort they both sleep. Your gentle kiss lets her know, She is your woman. She treasures the little things you give her, like the heart, shaped from a wire tie. She'll go to a baseball game with you and when your team hits a home run she'll jump up and yell, "TOUCH DOWN!!" She can make a gourmet meal out of macaroni and cheese. She can, and sometimes will mow the lawn She can change a flat, check the oil, and even push you on your motorcycle as you try to jump start it. Laughing with you as the neighbors look on She can even jump start your engine with her own little Victoria Secret. What a woman!!! Damn you are a lucky man!!! Emanating from her core are tendrils which carry on the vines things such as, Love, Kindness, Compassion, Empathy, Joy, Peace, and even a strong faith. These things travel through her heart, the place where her core resides. It is safe from corruption. Her heart may break but her core can never be hurt. And at the end of the day, all she asks, and needs, is to hear three little words. "I love you" |
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Very good write, I enjoyed reading it.
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A very fitting tribute to W.O.M.A.N.
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LAMons "deepest thoughts of a woman" Inspired me to upload this one here. Hope you enjoy it. The core of a woman The way she looks at you when you catch her watching you. Her eyes mesmerize you as you walk toward her. Her warmth flows from her body as you stand hand in hand. Her gentle kiss tells you, You are her man. She carries your babies, mothering your children. Her maternal instincts kicking in, you have no worries, she's there, the glue, the bond, holding and keeping the family bound, tightly woven together. She makes sure your children are well cared for. In the middle of the night she wakes to their call, she feeds them then gently, with a soothing voice, sings them to sleep with a childhood lullaby. If you are lucky enough you can watch her as she sits with her child snuggled and protected in her arms while in quiet comfort they both sleep. Your gentle kiss lets her know, She is your woman. She treasures the little things you give her, like the heart, shaped from a wire tie. She'll go to a baseball game with you and when your team hits a home run she'll jump up and yell, "TOUCH DOWN!!" She can make a gourmet meal out of macaroni and cheese. She can, and sometimes will mow the lawn She can change a flat, check the oil, and even push you on your motorcycle as you try to jump start it. Laughing with you as the neighbors look on She can even jump start your engine with her own little Victoria Secret. What a woman!!! Damn you are a lucky man!!! Emanating from her core are tendrils which carry on the vines things such as, Love, Kindness, Compassion, Empathy, Joy, Peace, and even a strong faith. These things travel through her heart, the place where her core resides. It is safe from corruption. Her heart may break but her core can never be hurt. And at the end of the day, all she asks, and needs, is to hear three little words. "I love you" Flame thank you much for your comment and for reading. Dragon a big thanks to you also Bonny I appreciate your stopping by and commenting |
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I hear all the women saying..yessssssss.yeeeeeeeees yesssssssss!
And some of the men nodding. Life is too short to do anything but appreciate every little wonder of each other! |
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I hear all the women saying..yessssssss.yeeeeeeeees yesssssssss! And some of the men nodding. Life is too short to do anything but appreciate every little wonder of each other! Especially as we get older. Every day for us should be lived to the fullest. Thanks much for sharing your thoughts |
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Definitely goes in with my favorites!
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Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence.
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Definitely goes in with my favorites! Thank you so much. Means alot to know you really appreciate this. |
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Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence. It would be nice if it could help with domestic violence. You really don't want to get me started with it. I have a hard time with those who would hit a woman. No I'm not a writer. Just a guy who likes to out into words the things I feel. Thanks Ivy I appreciate your thoughts |
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Are you sure your not an author and poet in deguise. This work that you putting up for us to read is excellent. This poem should be required reading for all men maybe there wouldn't be as much domestic violence. It would be nice if it could help with domestic violence. You really don't want to get me started with it. I have a hard time with those who would hit a woman. No I'm not a writer. Just a guy who likes to out into words the things I feel. Thanks Ivy I appreciate your thoughts WOW...beautiful, just beautiful!!!!! |
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Thank you much 5X10.
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"Her own little Victoria's Secret" - Wonderful!
Well, you know how I feel about this piece Ron, I loved it before and I still love it! |
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"Her own little Victoria's Secret" - Wonderful! Well, you know how I feel about this piece Ron, I loved it before and I still love it! Yeah I kinda like that line myself. lol. I held onto it for awhile debating about posting it. Thanks Alicia I always appreciate your kind words. |
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A Valentine
The heart of what matters along the nape of her soul reflecting the deep completing in whole sometimes it is good to know what is seen allowing a step when pushing to breathe it is in the heart where a man soon knows that all around her is the garden she grows She'll kiss you and need you esteem her in tender her joy is in giving her love, this reminder. Raine Les 3/8/2009 you have opened a sweet memory, thanks |
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A Valentine The heart of what matters along the nape of her soul reflecting the deep completing in whole sometimes it is good to know what is seen allowing a step when pushing to breathe it is in the heart where a man soon knows that all around her is the garden she grows She'll kiss you and need you esteem her in tender her joy is in giving her love, this reminder. Raine Les 3/8/2009 you have opened a sweet memory, thanks Sharis this is a wonderful piece. I especially like the third stanza. Every guy should red that and appreciate the things a woman can grow in her garden. Thanks much for sharing. |
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