Topic: The Man
lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:34 AM
Edited by lurchs_sister on Tue 03/03/09 09:15 AM
The man
that's standing
there with
no hair
is so
alluring
I can't
help but
stare

This man
has wrinkles
deep within
his brain
is so
intelligent
it almost
makes me
sane

That man
that's waiting
with the
bright smile
is so
charming
i want
to stay
awhile

This man
now watching
with gorgeous
deep eyes
is so
amazing
my breath
just catches
sighs


My no longer so quiet admiration from what will be not so farblushing

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:39 AM
Wow,....Is'nt that a cool a$$ feeling when you see someone that can take your breath away..just by looking at them...:smile: flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:39 AM
He's wonderful inside and out!flowerforyou

robert1652's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:45 AM
I always said you write well didn't I?

Are all of those qualities in one man?
Wow
He sounds like my uncle Gordon

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:49 AM

I always said you write well didn't I?

Are all of those qualities in one man?
Wow
He sounds like my uncle Gordon


They are all one man and he is a great friend...

Good to see you Mr!flowers

DaveyB's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:49 AM
Nice write you paint a very nice image.:smile:

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 08:51 AM
flowerforyou

Nice write you paint a very nice image.:smile:


Would be hard not to with this inspiration

Thank you!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:07 AM
"The man
that's standing
there with
no hais"


Confused - no what? Edumacate me please; Otherwise, I love this!

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:14 AM
I like the way this piece flows. Very nice.

But I to wonder about the word "hais"

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:15 AM
Humm seems you have found the one your searching for good luck.bigsmile


Hummmmm the hais only thing I could find was Healthcare-Associated Infections whoa

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:17 AM
blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:18 AM

blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.



:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: well that is a lot better then what I had found and was wondering about lol:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:21 AM

blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.



The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with.

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:24 AM


blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.



:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: well that is a lot better then what I had found and was wondering about lol:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:



laugh laugh laugh OH NO!!! That scares me lady!!!laugh laugh laugh

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:24 AM


blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.



The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with.


I should have proofed it better before I posted it... It is fixed now.

no photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:30 AM



blushing blushing blushing

TYPO!!! The word is hair


Now I am really blushing!!!!!blushing blushing blushing


Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it.



The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with.


I should have proofed it better before I posted it... It is fixed now.


No matter how much I proof read something I always seem to miss something.

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:38 AM
I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words..
we live in a melting pot..

though kidding aside,
you have quilled a deep caring man..

MirrorMirror's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:39 AM
flowers

Sharris's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:40 AM

I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words..
we live in a melting pot..

though kidding aside,
you have quilled a deep caring man..


actually, I went back looking for the notorious ..hais..did not really read it..so it was correct all along..or am I looking for something to see.??hmmm

lurchs_sister's photo
Tue 03/03/09 09:42 AM

I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words..
we live in a melting pot..

though kidding aside,
you have quilled a deep caring man..


Thank you for seeing through my error and into the depth of what I said as he is just that.flowerforyou


(((Lee)))flowers