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Edited by
lurchs_sister
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Tue 03/03/09 09:15 AM
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The man
that's standing there with no hair is so alluring I can't help but stare This man has wrinkles deep within his brain is so intelligent it almost makes me sane That man that's waiting with the bright smile is so charming i want to stay awhile This man now watching with gorgeous deep eyes is so amazing my breath just catches sighs My no longer so quiet admiration from what will be not so far ![]() |
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Wow,....Is'nt that a cool a$$ feeling when you see someone that can take your breath away..just by looking at them...
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He's wonderful inside and out!
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I always said you write well didn't I?
Are all of those qualities in one man? Wow He sounds like my uncle Gordon |
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I always said you write well didn't I? Are all of those qualities in one man? Wow He sounds like my uncle Gordon They are all one man and he is a great friend... Good to see you Mr! ![]() |
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Nice write you paint a very nice image.
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![]() Nice write you paint a very nice image. ![]() Would be hard not to with this inspiration Thank you! |
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"The man
that's standing there with no hais" Confused - no what? Edumacate me please; Otherwise, I love this! |
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I like the way this piece flows. Very nice.
But I to wonder about the word "hais" |
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Humm seems you have found the one your searching for good luck.
![]() Hummmmm the hais only thing I could find was Healthcare-Associated Infections ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with. I should have proofed it better before I posted it... It is fixed now. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() TYPO!!! The word is hair Now I am really blushing!!!!! ![]() ![]() ![]() Don't know if I have found that one I am admiring and being vocal about it. The word hair came to mind but then I thought maybe "hais" was part of a new language, something you might expect your kids to come up with. I should have proofed it better before I posted it... It is fixed now. No matter how much I proof read something I always seem to miss something. |
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I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words..
we live in a melting pot.. though kidding aside, you have quilled a deep caring man.. |
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I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words.. we live in a melting pot.. though kidding aside, you have quilled a deep caring man.. actually, I went back looking for the notorious ..hais..did not really read it..so it was correct all along..or am I looking for something to see.??hmmm |
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I understood...hais..my mother made up lots of words.. we live in a melting pot.. though kidding aside, you have quilled a deep caring man.. Thank you for seeing through my error and into the depth of what I said as he is just that. ![]() (((Lee))) ![]() |
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