Topic: Just Something Deep,,,Not Funny--
Loves2Please's photo
Fri 09/29/06 12:38 PM
Boy And Girl And Love

the best of friends.

From elementary to high school

from

beginning to end.


Through all those years

their friendship grew.


They both felt the same,

but neither knew.

Each waking moment

since the

day they met.

They both loved each other

sunrise to sunset.


He was all she had

in her terrible life.

He was the one

who kept her from her knife.

She was his angel,

she made him smile.

Though life threw him curves,

she made it all worth while.


Then one day

things went terribly wrong.

The next few weeks

were like a very sad

song.


He made her jealous

on purpose he tried.

When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"

on purpose he lied.



He played with jealousy

like it was a game.

Little did he know

Things would never be the same.

His plan was working

but he had no clue.

How wrong things would go,

the damage he would do.


One night she broke down,

feeling very

alone.

Just her and the blade,

no one else home.


She dialed his number,

he answered, "Hello"

She told him she loved him

and hung up the phone.


He raced to her

house

just a minute too late.

Found her lying in blood,

her heart

had no rate.


Beside her was a note,

in it her confession.

Her love for this boy,

her only obsession.


As he read the note,

he knelt down and cried.

Grabbed her knife,

that night they both died.


She was found in his arms,

both of them dead.

Under her

note

his handwriting said:


"I loved her

so, she never knew.

All this time

I loved her

too."

cookieie's photo
Fri 09/29/06 02:06 PM
And so it is said, and we all know it but do we do it. Tell the people
you love that you love them. Sometimes we need to hear it not just
assume it.

no photo
Fri 09/29/06 04:21 PM
That's what I got from it too ,yet it is sad that so many people play
around and never show their true feels to the one they truly love; it
couldn't hurt everyone would show love these days instead of hate all of
the time:)Glad I'm an loving person:)

Loves2Please's photo
Fri 09/29/06 05:09 PM
Amen to that sister,,hell we all do something stupid when where with
someone,,but love needs to be treated as if it is the last thing on
earth,,,,,,

Jimi366's photo
Fri 09/29/06 06:39 PM
Dude! You are funny and have a deep side too!
Man this almost made me cry.

Loves2Please's photo
Sat 09/30/06 08:04 AM
Well its just a feeling storie,,so dont think of it being a bad
thing,,,,its just ones way of love,,,,,,

sheena's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:02 AM
you know i'v read some of your comment and thought you were funny but
that would be...that was deep and i loved it....reminds me of my ex
hmmmmm how things can change so quicckly huh???

no photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:05 AM
?????????????????????

ShagnaC's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:10 AM
OK I balled my eyes out. :O(

no photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:11 AM
oh... yhea?

ShagnaC's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:16 AM
Yeap, I am a very emotional person when it comes to stuff like that. :O(
People would never know as I work with some of the most hard core
adolescents in AZ and I am a tuff cookie.

no photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:17 AM
I UNDERSTAND THAT.

ShagnaC's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:20 AM
We have to put on a rough exterior with the kids we work with but I have
left work many of days just crying.

no photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:22 AM
YEP.. ME 2... I THINK IM IN LUV.....

ShagnaC's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:44 AM
What kind of work do you do? Humm in love with a independant strong
personalitied wome who can cry at a drop of a hat. Who loves good sex
hahaha

no photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:47 AM
what work????????????

ShagnaC's photo
Mon 10/02/06 12:49 AM
You said yeap me 2 after I said I cry many times after leaving work, You
lost me

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Mon 10/02/06 12:56 AM
i guess im getting tired.

no photo
Wed 10/04/06 07:19 AM
ur poem interested me:

Tha Real

to be honest is hard we all know that
to love is harder and that's a fact
but just to have it is most sacred
other observers view with hatred
this might help it the love carry on
or might not make it last that long
but true love can survive any test
never will it have to be out to rest
but before love there needs to be trust
and before that you must find the lust
spend some time and just so you can talk
spend some days when just together you walk
make a base and start the connection
but make sure you know your direction
dont be mislead by what you hear
and most of all face your fear
what ever it may be what ever the cause
love is something that cant be paused