Topic: A song... Or a poem! Couldn't that be on both?
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Sun 02/15/09 11:41 PM
Just a little song I wrote, since it's by me I wasn't sure if I was suppose to put it with the music topics... But songs are poems too right?

I dreamed that I cared less to cry
My pain and misery drowned
Broken stones resemble makers
Thrown against all I've wagered
I feel like a martyr;
Though I have reason to be
The pain keeps gripping harder
And once it holds on,
There will be no room to breath

I dreamed that I went numb from pain
If I ever felt at all
Never had the will to progress
But in the end it never started
I wish there was a reason;
My heart is torn to pieces
Because of this is it worth crying
Every corner turned I'm trying

I feel like a martyr;
Though I have reason to be
The pain keeps gripping harder
And once it holds on,
There will be no room to breath

I dreamed that I had never lived
A void had filled my space
All forgotten with its tragedies
Nothing left for simple remedies

I feel like a martyr;
Though I have reason to be
The pain keeps gripping harder
And once it hold on,
There will be no room to breath

I feel like a martyr;
Though I have reason to be
The pain keeps gripping harder
And once it holds on,
The pain will numb my defeat


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Sun 02/15/09 11:43 PM
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phoenixgoddess27's photo
Sun 02/15/09 11:48 PM
Honey it's real sad... but you're a good writer, hope I can make you feel better, maybe I will when you get here! With tons of hugs and kisses =)

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Mon 02/16/09 12:00 AM
Very interesting song

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Mon 02/16/09 12:51 AM
Lovely...Yes a song can be a poem and vice versa..