Topic: neglect
s1owhand's photo
Thu 02/12/09 04:37 AM
bleak and somewhat jumbled
vacated office
a rundown once active
but never prosperous neighborhood
the proprietor has moved on moved out
drones fled uninspired
worthless papers left
crumpled cellophane
a couple of broken desks
sick and vomiting
peeling veneer
sprung drawers
a wastebasket and loose screws
on the floor
the domain of no one
dust slowly builds
inside the hourglass
who cares so what

no photo
Thu 02/12/09 06:54 AM

bleak and somewhat jumbled
vacated office
a rundown once active
but never prosperous neighborhood
the proprietor has moved on moved out
drones fled uninspired
worthless papers left
crumpled cellophane
a couple of broken desks
sick and vomiting
peeling veneer
sprung drawers
a wastebasket and loose screws
on the floor
the domain of no one
dust slowly builds
inside the hourglass
who cares so what


<<-----------visualizing old downtown los angeles....a pathetic visual but portrayed extremely accurately with this one Henry...wow...:heart:

LAMom's photo
Thu 02/12/09 07:57 AM
Melting down of the Human race, spirit and surroundings,,,

Bravoooooooooooooo :heart:

pkh's photo
Thu 02/12/09 08:04 AM
really good

s1owhand's photo
Thu 02/12/09 08:10 AM
thanks

MsWiz :heart:
Mom :heart:
pkh :heart:

actually i have been doing a move
and was affected by imagery in some of
DT's writings

:wink:

d4tc's photo
Thu 02/12/09 10:22 AM
Excellent! :banana:

JasonSB123's photo
Thu 02/12/09 10:40 AM
visionary..wonderfully disturbing...COOL!shocked

Jess642's photo
Thu 02/12/09 11:44 AM
"Dust slowly builds within the hourglass...."



:cry:

Sharris's photo
Thu 02/12/09 11:11 PM

bleak and somewhat jumbled
vacated office
a rundown once active
but never prosperous neighborhood
the proprietor has moved on moved out
drones fled uninspired
worthless papers left
crumpled cellophane
a couple of broken desks
sick and vomiting
peeling veneer
sprung drawers
a wastebasket and loose screws
on the floor
the domain of no one
dust slowly builds
inside the hourglass
who cares so what


It is always the little things,
tidbits, nits and the gnats
attention to detail
at the end of the move,
they are the most tedious.
reflecting complacency

been a while..good to read your heart
sadieLu

s1owhand's photo
Fri 02/13/09 02:05 AM
thanks you
sadieLu

:smile: flowerforyou

RawB's photo
Fri 02/13/09 02:35 PM
That's raw, I like it, great visuals drinker bigsmile