Topic: dreams of you
Holly4459's photo
Sun 02/08/09 06:37 PM
in the quiet of my room
i listen to my
own
slow breath, it reminds me
i'm alive
and
wanting,waiting

for the feel of your
touch, your being,
your stength,

in the darkness of the night
i stare into my

dreams,to feel you...
to think of you-
i remember your essence-
i'm drowning in my own
want and tears...
my body exhales the sadness



trying to inhale the contentment
we once had
rewinding and rekindling
my love for you...



in the stillness of my heart
is an imprint of memory...
it flickers,and it stings
ignited by my hope -
that it will never be extinguished


it goes on
it burns
it endures
it is my dreams...
of you

plk1966's photo
Sun 02/08/09 06:38 PM
All I can say is WOW flowers

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Sun 02/08/09 06:41 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou drinker

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Sun 02/08/09 06:43 PM
That was inspiring and beautiful....flowerforyou

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Sun 02/08/09 06:47 PM
very beautiful flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Holly4459's photo
Sun 02/08/09 06:52 PM
Thank you everyone!flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/08/09 07:05 PM
nicely done...kind of sad the longing, but, real and well stated



flowerforyou

captaincliff's photo
Sun 02/08/09 11:19 PM
well now...look who jumped ship and has been writin' lyric tales......very nice....keep that flame alive....The crew applauds ye!!drinker :banana: drinks

Holly4459's photo
Mon 02/09/09 04:23 AM
Thank you everyone!!flowers

d4tc's photo
Mon 02/09/09 04:31 AM
Sincere and Dramatic. flowers

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Mon 02/09/09 06:03 AM
very nice Hollyflowerforyou flowerforyou

Holly4459's photo
Mon 02/09/09 12:34 PM
Thank you pkd1220 and d4tc:smile:!

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Mon 02/09/09 12:43 PM
May your words of heartache and desires fill the void with-in you. To rise up into a new dawn. Feeling proud, strong, knowing
your where you need to be right now. With GOD guiding your way,
For every new tomorrow of love not seen yet..:heart: flowerforyou Great write,,,,and Welcome to da-place-of write!
:wink: drinker :heart:

Holly4459's photo
Mon 02/09/09 02:20 PM
thanks iam4u!flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 02/09/09 04:17 PM
very nice

Holly4459's photo
Tue 02/10/09 04:54 AM
thank you pkh!smile2

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Tue 02/10/09 06:26 AM
Very heart felt and lots of emotion coming from this piece.

I wish you the best.flowerforyou :heart: