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Topic: Baby Blue
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Sun 02/08/09 11:55 AM
Baby Blue.

I see thru all the little things you do

Through these eyes filled with,
empathy and pain
I watch as you eagerly choose the path
of least resistance.
You walk away with swaying hips,
glancing back
I notice the painted lips
You slowly reach out and take
self destructions hand.
Blindly you follow, letting
deceit lead you away
You lie in the arms of sabotage
drinking nightly of his cheap words
disguised as fine wine.
Quickly you become
embroiled in a life entwined
with regrets and denial.
Unable to discern one
from the other you
choose the road to regret

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sun 02/08/09 12:14 PM
For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.

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Sun 02/08/09 12:22 PM

For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.


Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret.

Thanks for your comment.

BettyB's photo
Sun 02/08/09 12:54 PM
Rangeflowerforyou
That was excellent .flowerforyou flowerforyou

flame1cutie's photo
Sun 02/08/09 01:13 PM

Baby Blue.

I see thru all the little things you do

Through these eyes filled with,
empathy and pain
I watch as you eagerly choose the path
of least resistance.
You walk away with swaying hips,
glancing back
I notice the painted lips
You slowly reach out and take
self destructions hand.
Blindly you follow, letting
deceit lead you away
You lie in the arms of sabotage
drinking nightly of his cheap words
disguised as fine wine.
Quickly you become
embroiled in a life entwined
with regrets and denial.
Unable to discern one
from the other you
choose the road to regret

Very Excellent Write.flowers flowers flowers

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Sun 02/08/09 01:35 PM
Betty and Flame thank you both for your comments.

deepheartwaiting's photo
Sun 02/08/09 02:29 PM
wow - awesome Ron - so many take that path - especially if they become impatient for perfection...

carold's photo
Sun 02/08/09 02:38 PM


For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.


Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret.

Thanks for your comment.
it is life wouldn't we like to save our loved ones the pain, which hurt us also

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Sun 02/08/09 02:58 PM

wow - awesome Ron - so many take that path - especially if they become impatient for perfection...


Deepheart thank you much for the comment and for stopping by.


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Sun 02/08/09 02:59 PM



For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.


Yes it does, just to bad some have to experience regret.

Thanks for your comment.
it is life wouldn't we like to save our loved ones the pain, which hurt us also



Yes we would, unfortunatly some haved to learn the hard way.

Thanks for stopping by and reading

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Sun 02/08/09 04:15 PM

Baby Blue.

I see thru all the little things you do

Through these eyes filled with,
empathy and pain
I watch as you eagerly choose the path
of least resistance.
You walk away with swaying hips,
glancing back
I notice the painted lips
You slowly reach out and take
self destructions hand.
Blindly you follow, letting
deceit lead you away
You lie in the arms of sabotage
drinking nightly of his cheap words
disguised as fine wine.
Quickly you become
embroiled in a life entwined
with regrets and denial.
Unable to discern one
from the other you
choose the road to regret



My most favorite piece you've written Ron~raw and intimate, filled with the sorrow of someone in the position of not being able to do a damn thing about a painful situation....

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Sun 02/08/09 04:21 PM

For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.


Sorry wench but but you said it first and it's what i wanted to sayflowerforyou

Nice writedrinker it hits close to home for me.

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Sun 02/08/09 04:24 PM


Baby Blue.

I see thru all the little things you do

Through these eyes filled with,
empathy and pain
I watch as you eagerly choose the path
of least resistance.
You walk away with swaying hips,
glancing back
I notice the painted lips
You slowly reach out and take
self destructions hand.
Blindly you follow, letting
deceit lead you away
You lie in the arms of sabotage
drinking nightly of his cheap words
disguised as fine wine.
Quickly you become
embroiled in a life entwined
with regrets and denial.
Unable to discern one
from the other you
choose the road to regret



My most favorite piece you've written Ron~raw and intimate, filled with the sorrow of someone in the position of not being able to do a damn thing about a painful situation....


Hey Alicia. Good to see this evening.

Sometimes no matter how much we try or want to we just can't do anything about certain situations. They are out of our hands.

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Sun 02/08/09 04:25 PM


For some, the road to regret ends up being the path to resurrection.


Sorry wench but but you said it first and it's what i wanted to sayflowerforyou

Nice writedrinker it hits close to home for me.


Hits close to home for many. Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment

flame1cutie's photo
Mon 02/09/09 08:42 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: flowers flowers

carold's photo
Mon 02/09/09 09:08 PM
:wink:

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Mon 02/09/09 10:53 PM
flowerforyou drinker :heart: :banana:

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Tue 02/10/09 06:03 AM
Flame, Carol and iam4u thank you all for stopping by.

kc0003's photo
Tue 02/10/09 07:27 AM
Yes many can relate to this. Frustrating as it may be, life is filled with twist and turns so there is opportunity to right the ship.
Nice piece

pkh's photo
Tue 02/10/09 07:55 AM
great write

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