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Topic: Crimson Crush
lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 02/03/09 09:27 AM
Lips so deep Petals of a rose Wine in a glass Polish on toes Love in my heart A feeling within Sharing with another Living again Touch of a finger Electrical spark Lips met sweetly There in the dark Tone of your voice Soft on my ear Sweetest whispers Sounding so clear The beat of your heart Under my hand Completely alone As close we stand Finger to lips A gentle hush Kiss me breathless My crimson crush

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 02/03/09 09:32 AM
Excellent!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Tue 02/03/09 09:40 AM
Thanks (((J)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 02/03/09 07:06 PM
Kiss me breathless My crimson crush Beautiful

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 02/03/09 07:20 PM
very nice, love the last stanza

Wiccancowboy Joined Mon 10/01/07 Posts: 800	Tue 02/03/09 10:34 PM
just as gorgeous as you are hun

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 02/04/09 03:49 AM
that was great Vicki You in love my friend? Good to see and read you again

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 02/04/09 10:05 AM
Thanks to you all (((D))) (((pkd))) (((bill))) (((will)))

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