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Topic: Doubting Thomasina
Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 01/21/09 07:18 AM
Doubting Thomasina Doub-ting Thom-a-sina You know who you are. I’ve sat back and watched you. Girl, you know you’ve come so far. No longer lost In a world of numbing pain. Run your fingers cross those scars Knowing wisdom you have gained. Dout-ting Thom-a-sina Reaching heights from another’s wings. Square your shoulders, glance about, What are those shimmering things? No longer needing Others to choose your sights. Open up those wings, my girl, You’ve learned how best to fly. Oh Thom-a-sina, You’ve found your way for sure. It may be different from another’s, But you doubt it no more.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 01/21/09 07:22 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 01/21/09 07:43 AM
Mornin', Bill!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 01/21/09 07:49 AM
Yepppppeeeerrrrsssss,,,

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 01/21/09 07:49 AM
Doubting Thomasina Doub-ting Thom-a-sina You know who you are. I’ve sat back and watched you. Girl, you know you’ve come so far. No longer lost In a world of numbing pain. Run your fingers cross those scars Knowing wisdom you have gained. Dout-ting Thom-a-sina Reaching heights from another’s wings. Square your shoulders, glance about, What are those shimmering things? No longer needing Others to choose your sights. Open up those wings, my girl, You’ve learned how best to fly. Oh Thom-a-sina, You’ve found your way for sure. It may be different from another’s, But you doubt it no more. nice

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 01/21/09 08:13 AM
hmmmm(soft smile)mo-ah-ah-MMMM! Mirror mirror on this site, to my eyes, such a delight, hello and thanks, mirror.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 01/21/09 08:28 AM
Mornin', Bill! Morning Dkow

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 01/21/09 11:34 AM
another good one I can relate

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 01/21/09 12:32 PM
thanks, pk - yes, breaking old patterns is hard (I can always become better; however, I am no longer willing to go back to being less.)

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 01/22/09 04:30 PM
Doubting Thomasina Doub-ting Thom-a-sina You know who you are. I’ve sat back and watched you. Girl, you know you’ve come so far. No longer lost In a world of numbing pain. Run your fingers cross those scars Knowing wisdom you have gained. Dout-ting Thom-a-sina Reaching heights from another’s wings. Square your shoulders, glance about, What are those shimmering things? No longer needing Others to choose your sights. Open up those wings, my girl, You’ve learned how best to fly. Oh Thom-a-sina, You’ve found your way for sure. It may be different from another’s, But you doubt it no more. There is definitely a message here! I love this WonderWench!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 01/22/09 04:59 PM
nice write "fkw" see? i am still here...just short of words as of late

captaincliff Joined Wed 08/20/08 Posts: 70	Thu 01/22/09 05:05 PM
First of all...i love it. Second of all...is it bad form to offer a different end...not expecting the brilliant Wench to change anything?? (especially since the poem speaks to that directly)....anyway I couldnt help but end it like this: It may be different from another's Eye But doubt your Self no more

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 01/22/09 06:47 PM
thanks, Wiz O'the Wisp (no clue where that nickname came from, but I kinda like it Wiz O'the Wisp or Whip if you'd prefer - ya know I'm gonna be playin with that later, hmmmmm) KACE! yes, I see I see and thanks. Although, it is rather difficult to see straight when I'm still bouncing around from today's news---YEYYYYYYY! Capn' go ahead ON with your badself and no it's not bad form (you do have both hands and no hook right?), as long as it's done in a friendly manner and not condescending (that last part was for people who need to be taught diplomacy rather than just tellin somebunny, well if you did this and you did that and they basically rip your write to shreds and smithereens until their own version of excellence changes any thought you may have presented and mind you all of this is done in the interest of making you a better writer! Goodness, I found a button I think...........

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 01/22/09 07:11 PM
thanks, Wiz O'the Wisp (no clue where that nickname came from, but I kinda like it Wiz O'the Wisp or Whip if you'd prefer - ya know I'm gonna be playin with that later, hmmmmm) KACE! yes, I see I see and thanks. Although, it is rather difficult to see straight when I'm still bouncing around from today's news---YEYYYYYYY! Capn' go ahead ON with your badself and no it's not bad form (you do have both hands and no hook right?), as long as it's done in a friendly manner and not condescending (that last part was for people who need to be taught diplomacy rather than just tellin somebunny, well if you did this and you did that and they basically rip your write to shreds and smithereens until their own version of excellence changes any thought you may have presented and mind you all of this is done in the interest of making you a better writer! Goodness, I found a button I think........... Oh I LIKE that nick name!!!

captaincliff Joined Wed 08/20/08 Posts: 70	Thu 01/22/09 08:05 PM
MsWhip would seem to be a fitting moniker for MsWiz when she "is in da mood for a little confrontation...."(Smackwater Jack, credits to Carole King)

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 01/22/09 08:20 PM
MsWhip would seem to be a fitting moniker for MsWiz when she "is in da mood for a little confrontation...."(Smackwater Jack, credits to Carole King) <<--------------unhooking her bullwhip and snap cracking it at the captain