I know you are near
For I can smell your unforgettable fragrance
The smell of freshness accompanied by a hint of flowers
You open upon me with a light mist
Like gentle kiss
You come closer
The mist now turns to a heavy rain
More passionate I feel
Rain drops hitting the water
Leaves only dancing ripples
Ripples fade away with time
You are like the rain and I am the water
Your drops ripple upon my life
May you pour yourself on to me
And know not a single drop will be wasted
As you join me we become one
You are the storm above me
With the rain you gave, and left your mark
I feel as if you've gone for the drops have stopped
But then
At first I feel a gentle breeze as to be a whisper in my ear
As to say sweet words to a lover
I ask you to dance upon me for I want more
You smile as like the sun coming thru the clouds
Now I feel your wind blowing across me mighty as can be
You cause the waters to dance being of waves
I come alive with your force of nature
We dance as to need each other
Waters are turned by the waves that by your softest of touches
You leave upon me
You've left me in a mist of white as to hind me
So that others may not see
Or are you hiding from me?
As you rise like a great fire in the sky
I feel your rays of warmth
Burning thru the fog that you left me in
As a sign to bring me to life
Now I know you are near
You peal the fog away from me
So that you may shine completely on to me
Your rays of light peer deep with in me
And warm me from with in
You are my rain
My wind
My fog
My sun
You are everything to me

Simply Beautiful

Ditto, took my breath away.........

OMG Jimmy I am speachless

Thank you ladies I'm glad you enjoyed it

really beautiful

(((jimmy)))

you are amazing with words

that is wonderfull

more than very nice....
your words stirred me.....



poema maravilloso!!!!!!

Bravo Bravo such wonderful thoughts put into words. From the depth of your soul comes the over whelming warmth of truth.

Most Excellent

I loved it!