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lol, ty. Hell, it whipped out as a reaction to what y'all wrote - one of those don't think just let it roll moments.
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lol, ty. Hell, it whipped out as a reaction to what y'all wrote - one of those don't think just let it roll moments. Yep, yep, I do that quite often myself! |
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great write both of you
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great write both of you Thank you and happy to new to you! 
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lol, ty. Hell, it whipped out as a reaction to what y'all wrote - one of those don't think just let it roll moments. those are sometimes the best kind... thank you for your comments and for the letting it roll moment 
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great write both of you nice to see you Pam
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an amazing write comes from two exceptional minds joining forces- very nice 
thank you pk...but, there was only one exceptional mind at work here and i may have helped a little...
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an amazing write comes from two exceptional minds joining forces- very nice
thank you pk...but, there was only one exceptional mind at work here and i may have helped a little...
Oh, dont be silly....now come 'ere.... <<----------reaches out and grabs Kevin for big wet smooch ....
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You don’t know me The things I need The things that would Please Appease Excite and Delight me You never took the time To see what you would find It you only looked deeper Tried A little harder Looked A little farther To you It never mattered If my smile was real Or perhaps concealed The things I feel You didn’t want To see The real me But I looked deeper And now I’m free Of dreams and hopes Once holding me In your cold Uncaring Captivity When I look in your eyes I realize they’re nothing more Than impersonal copies Of what you’d Find on a mural Behind the Prescriptives counter And to think I used to fall So deeply Into them … Deep enough to Lose Myself Mindlessly Stumbling Fumbling Searching to find Something more Than Me To find a “We” That never Truly Existed Well I’ve been Enlightened My vision Heightened The darkness Lightened You’ve shown me Who you are And what You will Never be And now at last My path is wide And clear of Fantastical Notions Convoluted Emotions Emptied of The insincere Debris Under which You buried me The accumulation Of promises Promised Piled high On the tray Of hope Carried around By the Falsehearted You that I believed and Trusted Weighing Heavy On me with the Disenchantment Of a thousand Dreams Never to be Realized “I was once lost But now I’m found Was blind But now I see” Amazing grace Amazing waste Bitter taste Of loves embrace cool, I hear both your poetic voices, in this nice write 
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You don’t know me The things I need The things that would Please Appease Excite and Delight me You never took the time To see what you would find It you only looked deeper Tried A little harder Looked A little farther To you It never mattered If my smile was real Or perhaps concealed The things I feel You didn’t want To see The real me But I looked deeper And now I’m free Of dreams and hopes Once holding me In your cold Uncaring Captivity When I look in your eyes I realize they’re nothing more Than impersonal copies Of what you’d Find on a mural Behind the Prescriptives counter And to think I used to fall So deeply Into them … Deep enough to Lose Myself Mindlessly Stumbling Fumbling Searching to find Something more Than Me To find a “We” That never Truly Existed Well I’ve been Enlightened My vision Heightened The darkness Lightened You’ve shown me Who you are And what You will Never be And now at last My path is wide And clear of Fantastical Notions Convoluted Emotions Emptied of The insincere Debris Under which You buried me The accumulation Of promises Promised Piled high On the tray Of hope Carried around By the Falsehearted You that I believed and Trusted Weighing Heavy On me with the Disenchantment Of a thousand Dreams Never to be Realized “I was once lost But now I’m found Was blind But now I see” Amazing grace Amazing waste Bitter taste Of loves embrace cool, I hear both your poetic voices, in this nice write
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Well you've done it again. Feel like you're writing my life when I can't.
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Well you've done it again. Feel like you're writing my life when I can't.
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A Dynamite like Dynamic Duo!
Way too awesome! 
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an amazing write comes from two exceptional minds joining forces- very nice
thank you pk...but, there was only one exceptional mind at work here and i may have helped a little...
Oh, dont be silly....now come 'ere.... <<----------reaches out and grabs Kevin for big wet smooch ....
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cool, I hear both your poetic voices, in this nice write
thanks jim... 
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ty both for your collaboration...pretty cool...we don't see this too often...
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ty both for your collaboration...pretty cool...we don't see this too often...
We've been playing with this one for a few weeks back and forth....it was a wonderful collaboration to do with a wonderful writer~ |
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Nothing better then the words of two beautiful people coming together to express themselves. Kuddos to you both Awesome
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Nothing better then the words of two beautiful people coming together to express themselves. Kuddos to you both Awesome
Thank you lovely ~
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A Dynamite like Dynamic Duo!
Way too awesome!
Thanks d4 Nice of you to say |
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