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Alone again
A long cold night In a bed so wide It could Almost Be an ocean Carrying me Lost at sea With No one To hold onto Shell shocked Ripped suddenly From the cocoon Of together Floundering Flailing Wounded Wailing Rage Tempered By a tsunami Of hurt The you and me Known as we Dissipated Disintegrated Our embers Burnt out From a fire Once wild A woman-child Left with Nothing But a bitter Taste in My mouth Unable to Swallow Spewing out Alone… …again… Dec 21, 2008 |
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  Hang in there my friend
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Hang in there my friend
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Crying as I read this. Wishing I was as good with words.
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Crying as I read this. Wishing I was as good with words. <<----Gathering Chrissy into her arms
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That even impressed this ol boker dude. Dennis
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That even impressed this ol boker dude. Dennis Why thank you Dennis! I appreciate that
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Honey, I'm right there with you. Wish we were closer...we'd have a drink and celebrate together
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Honey, I'm right there with you. Wish we were closer...we'd have a drink and celebrate together
I know you're here with my darlin'....and I so very much appreciate it....
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Great poem.
I loved the alliteration in verse 2 and 3. My heart goes out to you. 
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Edited by
MsWizard
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Tue 12/23/08 11:46 AM
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Great poem. I loved the alliteration in verse 2 and 3. My heart goes out to you.
Thank you Mariposakc...much of my work utilizes alliteration although I'm not sure how I keep ending up using it....oh well, dont fix it if it aint broke, right? Thanks for reading and commenting, I appreciate it~
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Edited by
2Btrue2One
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Wed 12/24/08 06:00 AM
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I have a poem waiting for you
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I have a poem waiting for you
I found it my friend ((((((((((DANIEL)))))))))))))
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I have a poem waiting for you
I found it my friend ((((((((((DANIEL)))))))))))))
Happy to be at your service M'lady.. (((((((MsWizard)))))))
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oh my lovely friend you are not alone here or in the gist of this write
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Alicia..sometimes being alone is a good thig....
maybe bad timing...but..better things will come your way..a better person.. just be patient....and keep smiling.. cause u never know who is going to fall in love with your smile..then from there will be all good.. Merry Christmas.... remember..I am alone...and I am ok with that.. Friends can be for ever..stick with them for a while... 
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oh my lovely friend you are not alone here or in the gist of this write
Im never alone with friends like you~
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Alicia..sometimes being alone is a good thig.... maybe bad timing...but..better things will come your way..a better person.. just be patient....and keep smiling.. cause u never know who is going to fall in love with your smile..then from there will be all good.. Merry Christmas.... remember..I am alone...and I am ok with that.. Friends can be for ever..stick with them for a while...
Hello Sweetie~did you have a wonderful Christmas? Talk to the boys? Zanniegirl, we're all alone in one way or another, but friends keep us connected~Happy New Year to you, my friend~
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oh my lovely friend you are not alone here or in the gist of this write
Im never alone with friends like you~
and don't you forget it!!!! |
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