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Topic: Dang! Please read
bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 12:49 PM
My posts in Poetry..
How else can I know if what I am writing is drivel, or not..

Some awesome poetry here, in these threads, but, I need to know if there
are folks who like rhyming poetry..

Thanks..Vent's over..laugh drinker :heart:*

*(where applicable..sales tax included)

tantalizingtulip's photo
Thu 04/12/07 12:50 PM
well bibbbbbbbbbbbby where are they , love?:cry:

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 01:33 PM
All over the place, Love...I will post some here, if you promise to read
them!! flowerforyou :heart:

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 01:44 PM
Bye, people..I quit!! Have fun!!drinker

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 02:04 PM
Gone! Too bad! I liked your poetry..

nusalor's photo
Thu 04/12/07 02:07 PM
Hey bibby7-none of those last three posts rhymes!
They're not even really "poetry"
What's up? Share some lyrics and let's get this thing rockin!

Tameka's photo
Thu 04/12/07 02:14 PM
LOL at Nuslaugh laugh laugh

nusalor's photo
Thu 04/12/07 02:16 PM
Thanx Tameha! I'll get him started...

Mary had a little lamb.
Freddy had a pup.
Ronny had an alligator,
And ate the others up!

EmotionalTurbulance's photo
Thu 04/12/07 04:54 PM
If you write what is in you, it shouldn't matter what other feel about
it.
It's you, and we all take something different from it, yes?

tantalizingtulip's photo
Thu 04/12/07 04:55 PM
nusalor lmao

tantalizingtulip's photo
Thu 04/12/07 04:56 PM
yes nene' yes yes yes.......

It is a way to share and open ourselves up to others as well.

nusalor's photo
Thu 04/12/07 04:59 PM
Thanks tulip!
nene's right bibby-ya gotta give it up and let it go because it is
YOU...and we'd love to see that!

armydoc4u's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:06 PM
heck yeah bobby-

please write what you feel is needing to be written.

doc

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:11 PM
OK..Here it is!
__________________________________________

Ebonee
©by Bobby7

Sit by me, and I will play
Whatever thought that comes your way
A ballad soft, or Rock And Roll
Anything to stir your soul

I can, gently pluck these strings,
Until I feel that your heart sings.
You, alone control the song
That makes my fingers move along

Ebonee's your servant, too
Her lovely music's just for you
So, tell me just how long you'll stay
And, that will be how long I play...

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:12 PM
Love
By Bobby7

Love can smite the boldest heart, and bring it down to earth.
Love can touch the faintest heart, and show it what it's worth.
Love can reach the darkest night, and make the sun be felt
Love can reach the deepest hate...And make the hatred melt!

If, perchance true love found you, and you were not prepared
Worry not! for I assure, love has every flaw repaired!
True love can conquer hardened souls and make them shine anew!
I hope, my friend, where'er you hide..That true love has found you!!!

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:13 PM
I May Not Be
by Bobby7

I may not be the smartest man that ever walked this Earth.
But, I examine all the facts, to determine what they're worth.

I may not the kind of man that would stand out in the crowd,
But, I'll always stand behind my friends, and, of that, I'm very proud.

I may not be the kind of man to pass each and every test,
But I am the kind of man who will always give his best.

I may not the kind of man you'd want for company,
I'm a rough around the edges, and that's the way I'll always be.

So, if you stop to chat with me; and if I seem uncouth.
Just fire away your questions, and you'll always hear the truth.

I may not be the kind of man you'd like to call your friend,
But, I'm there each time I'm called upon, and I'll be there 'til the end

And if you think I'm not the man that you think I should be,
Well, when I look into a mirror, a nice man's looking back at me.

I may not be a lot of things that you would have me be...
Diversity's the "Spice of Life"...

That's why You're You...and I am me.

©Bobby7/2006

nusalor's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:31 PM
Your years and your spirit educate me
My play and words are young
and inexperienced...

Thank you for sharing Bobby7!
These are beautiful and I look forward to more.

bibby7's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:34 PM
Hell..I look forward to you reading more, Nusalor! laugh laugh
drinker

Tameka's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:36 PM
thanks bobby... they are great... flowerforyou

Tameka's photo
Thu 04/12/07 05:37 PM
am sooooooo sorry... meant bibby

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