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Doc, well written.
Anytime anywhere, let me know. |
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yea doc keep writing..
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This is truly totaly AWESOME.
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to give a title is to be for sale
so my rants in here dont deserve it- well... what kind of commercial what kind of billboard sign what kind of damn thinking can i give your aged mind something that has few syllables a rhyme on every line something that has a rythm to it to help you keep the time i promise not to tread to deep in waters above your head and maybe if you read real slow you'd understand what i said keep it simple stupid is a phrase i like to use i've had to do it all my life for people just like you i hope that didnt confuse you i hope your still with the class i hope some day you will learn theres many ways to kiss my ass you see here- we are writing creators of the same thing and if i had to title this i'd call it drama queen. |
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apologies are cheaped
by the over use of them all in a time when we need them most they never seem to call and there we are with our hands in the jar afraid in the moment that we took it to far and the cats have the feathers the dogs have the cats the man has the dog that he kicked at the mat and when we say its over it never really is we sit right back and take in it all cause we know we're full of shlt. |
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![]() ![]() Well phrased and simple enough for everybody ![]() |
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something not about the woes me
as someone said i write. all for her i write this thing cause you know shes always right. you are as prescious as a new born child not allowed to take a breath swimming alone in your darken world youve tried to sway many souls from death on the dirt, in an ungrateful time to them you try to crawl though try as you may, as hard as you may you can never save them all is it this one or that one a choice sometimes made the man or the woman or the little child tell me which one did you save people do not choose your chosen path its a burden of love from the heart and as much as it is, for all that it is Ms. Alex it also sets you apart. doc ![]() |
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Keep them coming doc.
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Glad to see you are writing, Doc. Keep 'em coming.
Oceans |
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thanks guys, helps me to keep my rantings in check i think.
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silence
not even a humm in the air darkness not sight of light anywhere unfeeling no sense of warth or cold blank the thought to behold tasteless as it can only be sensless black is all they see |
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to keep my writing
in here a public place for you to read to show my simple face is a honor for me to enlighten my minds and bring you along to see simpler times but for now i must go so some get their praise pushing down pure intent they only want their way for them i am sad bound by that hate you can have an opinion but nothing good on your plate peace to them all i hope they find a soul we'll see in the end but for now i'll just go peace |
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waking up today in a blur
from all the dreams that last night i heard ive been meaning to do some stuff for me but the times gotten short and no motivation to see and all that i was and all that i thought seemed to fade away as i watched the love rot and i want to scream to your heavens so its felt by all the bretheren for f**ks sake give it a rest you dont have to be my best i will do what i can for you to take a stand but dont take it for granted my eyes have been slanted enough with my rantings for you they dont mean a damn thing and i know its to much for that i am sorry but for me to speak to you is something i dont want a part of but allow yourself a love no matter from where its all good something besides hate to make you smile the way little kids should |
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no long drawn out thoughts
pleasant times turn to rot the knowledge that was sought has been abandoned, hands wrought exit stage left, its been real. peace to you all who are not pretenders or fake deceivers of truth. the rest of you bring my mojo down with your bad vibes. doc |
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i heard laughing little girls
playing on the merry go round spinning in circles watching strangers who kept coming around not a care in the world could i hear in their voice i wondered about their future and as if i had a choice i saw bright wonderful visions of a truth so pure then in a flash of its brilliance and i wasnt so sure if their wild flowers will ever still blossom their trees spring to life in the glory of the sun still i know their lives have not seen enough in the times of uncertainty i call on the love and listen intently for the laughing they shared spinning round in the world with not even a care sometimes we care, but only sometimes sometimes we share, but its only sometimes sometimes we laugh, still only sometimes sometimes we cry, mostly sometimes |
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heart filled with uncountable joys
little sights and sounds i love i watch her sleep on her bed with peace impatiently i wait for my good morning hug. a laugh so pure and innocent nothing pretencious in her i love you daddy she says to me but its more than the words i hear someday my life will have ran its course will i have done right in raising you did i do my best, to help you with your tests to make the right choices in all that you do i wish i had all the answers to every question that you had but there out there for you to find my advice given you from my dad so many dreams have for you to never feel pain never have a heartbreak success in everything follow your heart and to yourself be true dont worry about the little stuff because it wont worry about you stand up for yourself stand up for the right stand up for the helpless it helps ME sleep at night but above all else please dont grow up to fast i want you to be daddys little girl for as long as it lasts ![]() ![]() |
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Arisen from the ashes
the fire could not vanquish the soul of the lessor man we were than the ones we all know Have i come back for the dead have i come back for my mind is there any reason to suit you that some how we could find I love every bit about you I think your soul has beautiful lines where are you tonight are you walking through my mind? so we are alive as the world strums on by the swells tell the story as the surf washes the night in a moon hung so heavy what worries her weighted light that only two were in the morning and we finally had the sight the second coming of den himself arrogant and self assured but one little moment of levity pains of hurt to great be sure and .... hell bingo was his name oh there goes the neighborhood ![]() |
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