Topic: Sometimes we could be so untruthful
TheLonelyWalker's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:34 PM
I wrote this poem for a lovely lady who lives deep in my heart as a
constant embrace, but I guess I betrayed my own words...

Foundations of love

You are like a shadow.
I can see you, but I can't distinguish you.
Then I love you even more
because I want to discover you.

You are like an ice cube in my hand.
The more I try to grab you, the more you melt away.
Then I love you even more
because I can see you running as free as water.

You are like the wind.
You sorraund me, but I can't grab you.
Then I love you even more
because thanks to you I can breath.

By Miguel Cordova (TheLonelyWalker)

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:36 PM
WoW !!! Beautiful

Jess642's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:37 PM
:cry: Beautiful Miguel....love without boundaries..your words are felt
deeply...thankyou...:heart: flowerforyou

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:37 PM
wow..that's ...just wow

slowtogetit's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:39 PM
that is awesome lonelywalker

Tameka's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:39 PM
that was great... love it!!!

jeanc200358's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:44 PM
That was beautiful, Miguel. You have a natural talent for writing, and
it's obvious you speak from the heart.

unattached1967's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:53 PM
That is awesome.....very emotionally moving. I hope you find her.
Thanks for sharing.

TheLonelyWalker's photo
Wed 04/11/07 05:54 PM
I've already found her

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 04/11/07 11:31 PM
Oh where is the tissue :cry: :cry: :cry:

flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 04/11/07 11:36 PM
here ya go girlfriend...>>>>>>>>inserts kleenex box



:heart: flowerforyou