Topic: Perfect profile or not... Bring It ladies! | |
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It is time for another look, I have attempted a rewrite. I added new and removed old. Is it better now or before. All feedback is of course welcome! Love you ladies, and thank you for your help!
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It is time for another look, I have attempted a rewrite. I added new and removed old. Is it better now or before. All feedback is of course welcome! Love you ladies, and thank you for your help! Looks good, I was just bustin on ya last time. |
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I'd have to say over all it is pretty good but I did not see anything about the kind of woman you are looking for.
I think it would be a plus to add just a bit of this information to your profile. |
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honestly its a good profile, but I would be a little unnerved if you initially start handing out your references...you aren't applying for a job and i couldn't tell what you are looking for
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