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tonight i was asked if i could write a country/folk style song...thinking no, i didn't let it stop me from trying...
Your hearts been broken So many times You hold me back And you draw those lines But, I’m not the one Who’s been Hurtin you Unfurl your Suspicious brow Follow me Up to the clouds And I’ll dance with you Till the stars Don’t shine So put away Your runnin shoes I’ve got somethin To say to you Girl, I promise you I’m goin Nowhere Lay to rest the Empty smiles Take my hand Let’s walk for a while And I know we’ll Find ourselves in Better days Just sit with me Enjoy the fire I’ll tune up my Favorite guitar And I’ll sing for you Till the night Passes by So put away Your runnin shoes Sometimes to win You have to dare to loose And I promise you I’m goin Nowhere Girl I promise you I’m goin Nowhere kc08 |
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You got skill. ~Lovely~
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I hear it in my head ... an Amos Lee kinda vibe ...
Awesome my friend! I love it! 
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You got skill. ~Lovely~ thank you that nice of you to say 
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I hear it in my head ... an Amos Lee kinda vibe ... Awesome my friend! I love it! thank you (S) you know i always appreciate your comments
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'But, I’m not the one
Who’s been Hurtin you' sooo poignant ... so often the wounds of the past haunt the present ... |
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'But, I’m not the one Who’s been Hurtin you' sooo poignant ... so often the wounds of the past haunt the present ... yes they do...not so easy to rid those feeling sometimes |
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You made my night... Your song has given me allot to think about, wish I could hear the music that will go with it... Thank you....
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You made my night... Your song has given me allot to think about, wish I could hear the music that will go with it... Thank you.... thank you...nice to know too bad i am not capable of playing it, i only hear it in my head... 
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Good luck with it, hope to hear it on the radio someday...
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Good luck with it, hope to hear it on the radio someday... i'm afraid that would have to come from someone more talented than me...but, i do thank you for the comments... |
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This is awesome, I tried to write a song once, it didn't turn out the way I thought it would, LOL but still, I tried, yours is wonderful, great job! I could see this being sung, really cool. smiles
  
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This is awesome, I tried to write a song once, it didn't turn out the way I thought it would, LOL but still, I tried, yours is wonderful, great job! I could see this being sung, really cool. smiles trying is what it is all about...some work and some do not...you can do it i bet... thank you for the post...
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This is awesome, I tried to write a song once, it didn't turn out the way I thought it would, LOL but still, I tried, yours is wonderful, great job! I could see this being sung, really cool. smiles trying is what it is all about...some work and some do not...you can do it i bet... thank you for the post... Do you really think so? Tell the truth, giggles
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kc- what additional talents do you have that haven't been uncovered yet? Great lyrics - even though I don't like country.
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kc- what additional talents do you have that haven't been uncovered yet? Great lyrics - even though I don't like country. [/quote Funny thing is I don't like it either. But it didn't stop me...lol |
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Great job Sweetheart....VERY nice!!
 I can definitely hear music put to that.... |
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Edited by
Differentkindofwench
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Tue 11/25/08 07:59 AM
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Pk, read it with a Bob Dylan sound to it or perhaps Tom Petty.
oooo, OR Joe Crocker! |
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that was a great peom.like it alot
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Pk, read it with a Bob Dylan sound to it or perhaps Tom Petty. oooo, OR Joe Crocker! right you are DKW. Now I can get into it. Picturing Joe Crocker as I write |
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