Topic: When I find your Love !
Jimmy59's photo
Fri 11/14/08 02:18 PM
Needing Your Love



My wishes are small my wants are little and my needs need not be looked into. The way that you are in My Heart my mind and my soul. The world it's self can not hold the weight of this feeling that is deep with in my being for you. Because of this feeling that I carry for you all that you are and all that you will be is more important then anything on this earth. So when the thought of you crosses my mind I see your beauty that glows as bright as the brightest star in the heaven's. I feel your softness and crave your touch that I hold in my heart. When the day turns in to night I wonder will the night bring me the love that I am longing for. I know that you will be in my dreams because you always are. So I look forward to sleep for then I will be with you. Not wanting to awake from this dream knowing that you will not be with me puts a tear in my heart. As the days go by I wonder why can't my heart touch your soul with the love that I have for you ? Will love enter your mind and embrace your heart for me ? Will time allow me to express me deepest feelings that I hold in my soul for you ? Or will it be to late to tell you my inter most wants and my needs that I have for you. I can only wait in hope that it is not to late for me to be in love with you.



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flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 11/14/08 02:50 PM
beautiful,, flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Sat 11/15/08 09:01 PM
Thank You !

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 11/15/08 09:03 PM
Lovely! Welcome flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Sun 11/16/08 07:14 PM
Thanks for the welcome !

Smiling_Irish's photo
Wed 11/19/08 09:53 AM
Your content is beautiful. I believe we all want to love and be loved that way but few can express it so well. Thank you for sharing such personal feelings. I am impressed.
One comment in spelling & grammar:
THEN is used to denote WHEN
THAN is used to compare.IE., "I would like to meet you sooner THAN later"

Mystique42's photo
Wed 11/19/08 10:56 AM
Very nice! Thanks for sharing with us and welcome!flowerforyou

Jimmy59's photo
Thu 11/20/08 12:16 AM

Very nice! Thanks for sharing with us and welcome!flowerforyou
Your so welcome I'm looking forward to meeting some of the nice people like your self here. (((Smiley))

Jimmy59's photo
Thu 11/20/08 12:25 AM

Your content is beautiful. I believe we all want to love and be loved that way but few can express it so well. Thank you for sharing such personal feelings. I am impressed.
One comment in spelling & grammar:
THEN is used to denote WHEN
THAN is used to compare.IE., "I would like to meet you sooner THAN later"

Thank you your thoughts thay puts a smile on my heart. ( I see where the Spelling & Grammar needed to be corrected) I really do try to put together my thought correctly. This is very Impotent to me. Thank You again

Jimmy59's photo
Thu 11/20/08 12:25 AM

Lovely! Welcome flowerforyou
Thank you !

Jimmy59's photo
Thu 11/20/08 12:26 AM

Lovely! Welcome flowerforyou
Thank You !