Topic: But i Love Him
ChangeofHeart's photo
Tue 11/11/08 04:03 AM
There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist
and put me down
you say you love me
while you pull my hair
i wouldnt dare stare
because i couldnt bare
the stairs that tear the
gentle fabric that
you cherish
on on those
sotted nights
of sodomy,passion
and pain
waking with the look of
disdain
as i try too flee
to safety
from the pain
the remains
from the insane
love that you have for me

AngelLight's photo
Tue 11/11/08 04:10 AM
"There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist
and put me down"


Perfect opening. Perfectly true....A very poignant and important write flowerforyou

ChangeofHeart's photo
Tue 11/11/08 04:13 AM

"There is no Bliss when you twist my wrist
and put me down"


Perfect opening. Perfectly true....A very poignant and important write flowerforyou

Thank you:angel: waving

no photo
Tue 11/11/08 05:51 AM
powerful writeflowerforyou

no photo
Tue 11/11/08 07:02 AM
drinker :thumbsup: nice write dude

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 11/11/08 10:25 AM
Good shot flowerforyou

enderra's photo
Tue 11/11/08 10:27 AM
flowers

ChangeofHeart's photo
Tue 11/11/08 03:59 PM

powerful writeflowerforyou
Tybigsmile

ChangeofHeart's photo
Tue 11/11/08 03:59 PM

drinker :thumbsup: nice write dude
glasses

ChangeofHeart's photo
Tue 11/11/08 04:00 PM

flowers
tongue2 flowerforyou waving