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I try, so many attempts
Seems unless I am broken and torn The words tend to hide, my heart remains still Battered, beaten and worn Sadness crippling me to the point of emotions release Were how my words happened to be Suddenly a changing moment The day you came to me I slept as the moonlight cast it's blue darkness Against the midnight dew Words lurking about in my mind as I slumber Dreaming of My Beautiful You Awakened one crisp morning With this smile upon my face The joy in my heart noticing sunshine All darkness is now erased KLS 10-03-08 |
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nicely written
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nicely written
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 Yesssssssssssssssss Nice indeed
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Yesssssssssssssssss Nice indeed
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KIMMY....!!!!!!
Beautiful Hon...really beautiful! Writers block ...my rear!!! Wow...what a come back....
Girl...get back on that book!! |
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KIMMY....!!!!!! Beautiful Hon...really beautiful! Writers block ...my rear!!! Wow...what a come back....
Girl...get back on that book!!  Thank you Darlin'
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May you find love and light!
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Very very nice
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That was just so incredibly warm and beautiful!! Your expression of love and the quiet peace and serenity emanate (eminate!) from your flowing words.......
One of the persons posted that you may be writing a book??? If your poems are ANYWHERE NEAR as lovely as this one-you'll be a certain best seller, and PLEASE let me know if/when it would be published-I'd purchase it in a heartbeat........ Will be watching for more of your posts Just wonderful MisKim.......
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"I slept as the moonlight cast it's blue darkness
Against the midnight dew Words lurking about in my mind as I slumber Dreaming of My Beautiful You Awakened one crisp morning With this smile upon my face The joy in my heart noticing sunshine All darkness is now erased" Oh darlin', that is awesome....Bravo! 
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BB and Angel...your words have brought tears to my eyes...I am very humbled...thank you so much
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At times words are merely lurking within trying to escape but not knowing how to. Then we are given a ray of sunshine and the words tend to flow like a river.
May your ink well never run dry, very nice write. 
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Kim...
Just beautiful honey, I LOVED it!!!
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Txs Gal and Joanne...thank you both so very much
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Excellent Write!
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Excellent Write!
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