Your Honor..You MUST Lock Him UP!!
The crowd, they did exclaim!
If not for us, then do it for him
He's obviously INSANE!

The Judge asked..what did he do?
Inflict some grevious pain?
FOR IF HE DID..Ill Throw away the key!
And there he wil remain!

The crowd went silent...for just a moment
Pondering on how to explain
When a man stepped forward, and said, Judge
I cannot and will not refrain!
We have all had it up to here...with him!
And his lies, we all do disdain!

The Judge said.."I know he comes up with some doozies
So what is his latest Claim??

Judge,..may i whisper it to you?
For this is hallowed ground.
And I dont want the children to hear of this
Not a whisper , not a word or a sound
So the claim was relayed
The judges face went astound!

LOCK HIM UP!!
The judge did yell..
Its Blasphemy...do tell!
Its completely and utterly, unfound
And may God forgive him,
To make such a claim,
That the world we live on is Round!
Brad Yates...06/2005

Pretty darn good there my friend,, I liked it a lot .. keep them coming
rick

Brilliant! Utterly amazing!

Very good caught my attention

great storytelling

This mfer writes as good as he looks!!!!!!!!!!Sweet!!!!!

Nice write Brad....you sooo rock!!!!

Nice flow and you held my interest... Great write!

Captavating, creative although it might be truth, I was tantalized by laid out phrases before my eyes, yet they watering not wanting to blink for the intensity of the version, I was locked in forced to read beyond, my how you exposed yourself and idenity.

Awwwh, it's so beautiful to see the real person!

I am breathless

Wonderful write Brad...from a wonderful man...thank you so much for sharing this with us

I am so flattered by all your comments!!!!!!!!!
Thank You all...so much!!!
Brad

Loudly claps and whistles ---- Oh yeaahhhhh.................