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What do you think about my profile anything i could change
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I think your profile looks fine.
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I think your profile looks fine. thank you |
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I like it! Good luck in the police academy.
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I think its just fine... you could list a few more interests, unless you don't have anymore.
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I like it! Good luck in the police academy. yea finally got around to changing the about me section took me long enough huh |
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I think its just fine... you could list a few more interests, unless you don't have anymore. i do and i could definitely do that thanx |
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Well...lol... I would delete a couple of wells and add a photo that shows your face and head without a cap (if you are bald be bold if not they think you are with the hat) but in the top 90th percentile as profiles go. Should generate some responses because it is easy to find something to ask in and opening email. Good luck.
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Well...lol... I would delete a couple of wells and add a photo that shows your face and head without a cap (if you are bald be bold if not they think you are with the hat) but in the top 90th percentile as profiles go. Should generate some responses because it is easy to find something to ask in and opening email. Good luck. no not bald just like hats but i think i could get some pics of my hair and face |
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What do you think about my profile anything i could change I like what you added too it. It looks great I still want to go to a game with you. If your still up for it!! |
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Well [delete "well"] my name is James i currently work as a financial agent in Hiawassee Ga. I like my job but im [I'm] going in a different direction[.] im[I'm] currently enrolled in the February [']09 police academy in Athens Ga. (cool!) [paragraph break]
I own my own home here in blairsville[.] i love them Georgia bulldogs[!][--]and a little [N]nascar[.] [paragraph break?]i like it here in the mountains and believe ill[I'll] probably stick around here since all my family live here and lots of friends[;] they are very important to me[.] [paragraph break]well i would have to say that's me in a nutshell[!] Profession: Fina[n]cial Agent __________ James, you seem like a wonderful and interesting guy, albeit short on writing skills--and you are very photogenic/handsome, though your pics do make you seem a bit one-dimensional. (And that's a bada$$ truck, btw!! Really!) Clean your profile text up a bit and you're good to go. It's nice to meet you! yours in Chaos, Scarlett |
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