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Topic: A Place
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 09/09/08 09:22 AM
A Place There is a place, where no one holds on. In the rolling rapids where the current, so strong, allows only its purpose. Created and bending, until its fury is sated. Such energy, spending. Where you are left only to bleed, To watch as you become, and then to believe. A place, it is there, as your efforts give way, Realize and thankful. For another full day. Raine Les 9/8/2008

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 09/09/08 09:48 AM
very nice

ladyof3 Joined Sat 07/12/08 Posts: 263	Tue 09/09/08 09:51 AM
Very nice!

flame1cutie Joined Thu 04/24/08 Posts: 7307	Tue 09/09/08 09:56 AM
Very nice write

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Tue 09/09/08 10:03 AM
beautiful sadie

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 09/09/08 10:07 AM
A Place There is a place, where no one holds on. In the rolling rapids where the current, so strong, allows only its purpose. Created and bending, until its fury is sated. Such energy, spending. Where you are left only to bleed, To watch as you become, and then to believe. A place, it is there, as your efforts give way, Realize and thankful. For another full day. Raine Les 9/8/2008 Blessed are we with your vision's

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