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Topic: The lake in the mountain
Noden's photo
Sat 09/06/08 07:53 AM
The lake in the mountain,
gently awaits you presence
rippling blues, sky so true
stand upon the dock
let your thoughts flow thru
chase away those bad memories,
that daunt you
when at times you are lost
and feelings are abound
come to the lake in the mountains
where no one else is around
with the wind
softly blowing through your hair
there's no one to stare
chasing down the afternoon air
without a single care
caress your emotions
let them burn up wild
like the fondest childhood memory
become like a child
jump, run, laugh
forget about the past
grab a hold of a good memory
and make it last,
so go ahead and go be-on
the daily humdrum
take a drive out to mountain
look out onto the lake
as far as the eye can see
the fingers of the trees
are dipping into the water
touching the soft embrace
of the swirls going by
the darkest blue colors
paint the beauty of it all
as the tree line breaks
the matching color of the sky
wrap it up in your arms
all of mother natures charms
a gift she gives to us
each day we deal unjust


Dabbins of Noden

no photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:00 AM
WOW...Very nice!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:11 AM
Act like a child - happy to anytime any day and yeah buddy definitely with you at Dabbin Lake!

Noden's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:13 AM

WOW...Very nice!


Thank ya, honey, and hiya Wench! You little baby cakes you...drinks tongue2 waving flowers

Noden's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:15 AM

Act like a child - happy to anytime any day and yeah buddy definitely with you at Dabbin Lake!


There you are, yes let's god how I'd love itdrinks flowers tongue2

LAMom's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:26 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh I am so there,, Hugs & Kiss's to you Beautiful,,,,,

flowers

Noden's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:36 AM

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh I am so there,, Hugs & Kiss's to you Beautiful,,,,,

flowers



Thanks (((((((((MOM)))))))))!!!!waving tongue2 flowers wouldn't have it any other way...kisses and hugs back at cha woman!

lurchs_sister's photo
Sat 09/06/08 08:38 AM
I'm so LOVIN this (((((NODEN)))))

Missed you and this is wonderful! I can see the lake and feel the breeze!

flame1cutie's photo
Sat 09/06/08 09:00 AM
Very nice indeedflowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 09/06/08 09:12 AM
Hey this mud is heaven on rough feetzes!

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Sat 09/06/08 11:19 AM
I so want to be there right about NOW. Great writedrinker drinker flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 09/07/08 02:31 PM
Very nice write. serene and tranquil. Sounds like heaven to me. flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 09/07/08 04:43 PM
That was very beautifully written sis...loved the descriptives.

pkh's photo
Sun 09/07/08 04:46 PM
very nice

Noden's photo
Sun 09/07/08 06:24 PM
thanks to ya'll, I loved getting these comments it means a lot to me!drinks flowers waving tongue2

Hajimemashite's photo
Sun 09/07/08 06:44 PM
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Noden's photo
Sun 09/07/08 06:46 PM

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Thanks my dear friend, my amigo!, I knew you'd be here somewhere, so nice when you pop by, one big hug and I promise it won't hurt.drool flowers flowers waving tongue2

kc0003's photo
Sun 09/07/08 10:51 PM
so nicely done

it is great to have you back


johncarl's photo
Sun 09/07/08 10:58 PM
i missed you.i can only hope that some day i can meet some one like you that is not afraid to express how they feel.please tell me god did not break the mold of youflowers ps i love the write:heart: smooched love

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Sun 09/07/08 10:59 PM
As the waters ripple and the air smells pure.
I wish so often that this was our cure.
Feeling free and one with Mother nature.
Just to come back home to realities rapture.

:heart: flowerforyou I hope life has had you in a great romance, and to been out traveling the high sea's.
And I am glad your back here for all-of-us to read.
:heart: drinker :banana: Keep on writing your beautiful poems

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