Topic: The lake in the mountain | |
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The lake in the mountain,
gently awaits you presence rippling blues, sky so true stand upon the dock let your thoughts flow thru chase away those bad memories, that daunt you when at times you are lost and feelings are abound come to the lake in the mountains where no one else is around with the wind softly blowing through your hair there's no one to stare chasing down the afternoon air without a single care caress your emotions let them burn up wild like the fondest childhood memory become like a child jump, run, laugh forget about the past grab a hold of a good memory and make it last, so go ahead and go be-on the daily humdrum take a drive out to mountain look out onto the lake as far as the eye can see the fingers of the trees are dipping into the water touching the soft embrace of the swirls going by the darkest blue colors paint the beauty of it all as the tree line breaks the matching color of the sky wrap it up in your arms all of mother natures charms a gift she gives to us each day we deal unjust Dabbins of Noden |
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WOW...Very nice!
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Act like a child - happy to anytime any day and yeah buddy definitely with you at Dabbin Lake!
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WOW...Very nice! Thank ya, honey, and hiya Wench! You little baby cakes you... |
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Act like a child - happy to anytime any day and yeah buddy definitely with you at Dabbin Lake! There you are, yes let's god how I'd love it |
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh I am so there,, Hugs & Kiss's to you Beautiful,,,,,
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Ohhhhhhhhhhhh I am so there,, Hugs & Kiss's to you Beautiful,,,,, Thanks (((((((((MOM)))))))))!!!! wouldn't have it any other way...kisses and hugs back at cha woman! |
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I'm so LOVIN this (((((NODEN)))))
Missed you and this is wonderful! I can see the lake and feel the breeze! |
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Very nice indeed
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Hey this mud is heaven on rough feetzes!
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I so want to be there right about NOW. Great write
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Very nice write. serene and tranquil. Sounds like heaven to me.
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That was very beautifully written sis...loved the descriptives.
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very nice
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thanks to ya'll, I loved getting these comments it means a lot to me!
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Thanks my dear friend, my amigo!, I knew you'd be here somewhere, so nice when you pop by, one big hug and I promise it won't hurt. |
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so nicely done
it is great to have you back |
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i missed you.i can only hope that some day i can meet some one like you that is not afraid to express how they feel.please tell me god did not break the mold of you ps i love the write
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As the waters ripple and the air smells pure.
I wish so often that this was our cure. Feeling free and one with Mother nature. Just to come back home to realities rapture. I hope life has had you in a great romance, and to been out traveling the high sea's. And I am glad your back here for all-of-us to read. Keep on writing your beautiful poems |
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