Topic: THE FINAL PRICE
Oceanladysea's photo
Thu 03/22/07 01:41 AM
The sun has fallen from the sky
The moon is racing with the wind
The earth revolves in wider circles
The time is closer to the end.
Forgotten moments suddenly remembered
Too late to be of consequence
Life is hanging by a silver thread
Ending and beginning make no sense.
Childhood abruptly denied those who've come
Old age will never cause pain
Emotions will not again be experienced
In silent rows the bodies lain.
This total destruction we alone have wrought
Always in greed we reacted
And now the final price must be paid
The ending toll is now exacted.

DARKAVENGER's photo
Thu 03/22/07 01:52 AM
I really enjoyed reading this..These words are an intence image of life
and death,,thank you for writing this
JT

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 03/22/07 09:14 AM
very good indeed.