Topic: Wake Me Not Today
myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/25/08 12:53 PM
I have lived a life with you already

though daydreams do not count

more is the pity

for we had a rather jolly time of it

making faces at each other

while others pondered

our sanity

Our hands held fast

while the rocking began

truth spoken in whispers

filled with passionate hopes

solid foundations

built upon strong ground

Oh how the rolling tides did tug

but we cut a rug

and made it into a cheerful dance

of time and memory

wicked cool disagreements

made better with breathless giggles

as I accept

and you accept

and life was gone together

a dream lived deep

while I was asleep

hit the snooze alarm and return dear.

sara89's photo
Mon 08/25/08 12:59 PM
flowerforyou oh i really like that one.

s1owhand's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:06 PM
me too. bigsmile

SangRio's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:21 PM
that was sweet, i liked it....

let me see if i could think of something real quick to go with that.....

Dreams or day dream, commas nor unconscious i could only remember the breathe slow breathing of the drama between loving one another yet hating upon dont bother me with stupid words that come from your heart cause all i get is attacks from the silent yet deadly feeling of whats called love. And i cannot remember the day i had gone away from you, but the farther i get i could only get sheer visions and the thoughts are cleared too, can i try to forget what i tried to remember before, can i afford to forget what had cost me much to assemble, to remember the emotions that we put in together, can i forget the dreams i had with you forever i tried to forget in time it just haunts me, so i hate you!!! yes......I hate you cause i love you, i cant forget you, there for i hate you!!!

d4tc's photo
Mon 08/25/08 01:21 PM
VERY NICE. happy flowerforyou

myanimalcracker's photo
Mon 08/25/08 03:24 PM
Thank you

sara flowerforyou
s1ow :heart: flowerforyou
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