Topic: "Whatever!"
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 03/17/07 06:35 PM
'Whatever!"

If you wanted to hurt me
you certainly did
A slap in the face is what I felt
with your cold shoulder
against my heart
I gave and gave you
what I could
but
It wasnt good enough
seems it never is
I thought this would last
I thought it was real
But, you obviously dont care
cause you just walked away
Closed your window, no more discussion
Just poof, your gone
and I'm supposed to say okay?
You did melt this heart of stone
I let you in
and you just walked on
as if I was nothing
a rug beneath your feet
You got what you wanted
then left me incomplete
YOU say I am a player
but it's your insecurities...
I'm not a gamer, or a pretender
I wont be changed
I wont be used
I'm angry right now
cause I'm covering the pain
these words are a release
and I'll be okay
Just give me some time
and maybe I'll cool off???

:cry: brokenheart :cry: brokenheart
:cry: brokenheart :cry: brokenheart

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 03/17/07 06:53 PM
Girl I hear your pain, guess we can wonder why but will never figure out
why others have to hurt ones they say they care about. flowerforyou

Ya know I'm here if ya need me bigsmile

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:07 PM
thanks txs....
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SaxOnBeach's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:13 PM
Sry to hear about your pain. It will get better.

herewego's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:21 PM
SCG.. i feel your pain. you are a great girl.. he doesn't know what he
gave up.. be patient the right guy will show up for you

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:49 PM
No more tears, nothing to gain
wiped em off and here i stand
tall and strong
head held high
confident and sure
no more why's
You offered your hands
these friends of mine
and thank you so much
for showing you care
Now I am calm
not in a heated rush
was just spouting out
emotion and such
Smiling again
eyes shining and bright
You guys here
are such a delight
to have when
the nights not goin right...


Thanks Ya'll..wink: :wink: :wink:
I'm really okay now!:tongue: drinker

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/17/07 08:37 PM
Glad to see your doing better. His loss your gain, and they always seem
to cry the blues after they decided it was over. The right one will show
some day and you won't have to feelthat pain again.

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

:wink:

G

Oceanladysea's photo
Sat 03/17/07 08:50 PM
You have a great talent. It is truly a blessing to be able to express
yourself with words. Keep it up, and don't forget to save everything.
You will find them speaking to you 20 years from now, and the words will
be the same but the meanings will change.

karmafury's photo
Sun 03/18/07 06:06 AM
Beautifully written SCG. His loss and some lucky guy's gain. The right
one will show.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 03/18/07 09:49 AM
{{{Thanks G}}}
Encouraging words form a beautiful soul who knows...flowerforyou

Thank You Osea...YOu are right. I should invest in a printer and save
these...appreciate your insight. flowerforyou

{{{{{Karma}}}}} Should I hold my breath darlin'? I think not...but maybe
youre right. He's probably right under my nose...

It just really hurts when you finally trust someone and they shut you
out...over one mistake...especially when you think you doing the right
thing...

LAMom's photo
Mon 03/19/07 10:21 AM
Wanda,,, Both poems so Beautiful,
Sorry for the Pain,,, The day will come
when your heart & Soul are filled with
Love & Happiness flowerforyou

Suede's photo
Mon 03/19/07 10:59 AM
sweetcountrygirl, Remarkable talent for putting your feelings on paper.
From your words I can see the pain you endured and the angry face of
deception. Is there a happy poem? Do we get to read the happy words? Can
we see the words that express love and joy and puts a smile on the paper
that stretches from margin to margin. Wishing you the best
sweetcountrygirl