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Topic: Honeymoon for One
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Sat 08/09/08 02:20 PM
Honeymoon for One

It's been days, I'm dazed
Left in a fog, dismayed
Life was to change
From one to two
August 19, date set
Trip scheduled, dress too
Wedding planned, with you
You changed, your mind
Said things, not kind
Clock stopped, unwind
Didn't see it, so blind
Life feels, undone
Leaving now, for fun
Going on my
Honeymoon for one

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Sat 08/09/08 02:27 PM
thats was good :smile:

BobbyJ's photo
Sat 08/09/08 02:31 PM
Very interesting!

:smile:

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Sat 08/09/08 02:33 PM
:cry:

Excellent poem!!! waving

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 08/09/08 02:33 PM
very niceflowerforyou

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Sat 08/09/08 02:40 PM
thanks for the comments
more therapy writing is coming
I don't write as much when happy

Molly 32- welcome to Mingle2 and thanks for commentingflowerforyou
Bobby J flowerforyou
SKPCG flowerforyou
Mirror flowerforyou

Gams's photo
Sat 08/09/08 02:41 PM
Good things can come out of the FALLOUT...like this poem!!!!
That was really good! flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 08/09/08 02:50 PM
What can I say lost for words here:cry:

If this is so he lost a good one.flowers

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Sat 08/09/08 03:35 PM
Thanks Gams- I plan on good things coming for meflowerforyou :smile:

Kristi- Thanks honey, I'm doing ok:smile::heart:

Sharris's photo
Sat 08/09/08 04:09 PM
Idea

Life changes so quickly,
And time to let go.
Consoling helps so little.
Well meaning, feels just so..

If I could, but, gift to you,
The best to help your soul.
All that it would be,
Continuous love, you'd know.

Past the unkind things expressed.
Beyond, so you may breathe.
Know this death, this cutting off,
Forgiveness, your reprieve.

Nothing makes this feel right.
For now, your bags are ready.
How about we all come instead?
For one, turns into many..

Raine Les 8/9/2008




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Sat 08/09/08 04:31 PM

Idea

Life changes so quickly,
And time to let go.
Consoling helps so little.
Well meaning, feels just so..

If I could, but, gift to you,
The best to help your soul.
All that it would be,
Continuous love, you'd know.

Past the unkind things expressed.
Beyond, so you may breathe.
Know this death, this cutting off,
Forgiveness, your reprieve.

Nothing makes this feel right.
For now, your bags are ready.
How about we all come instead?
For one, turns into many..

Raine Les 8/9/2008

Sadie-

No one has written my anything so beautiful. It brought tears, followed by a big smile. flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'll be in Sedona, Arizona, so come on along and we can hike in the beautiful red rock mountainsdrinker drinker



Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 08/09/08 04:36 PM
Good 4 you! Keep that spirit.

Sharris's photo
Sat 08/09/08 05:05 PM


Idea

Life changes so quickly,
And time to let go.
Consoling helps so little.
Well meaning, feels just so..

If I could, but, gift to you,
The best to help your soul.
All that it would be,
Continuous love, you'd know.

Past the unkind things expressed.
Beyond, so you may breathe.
Know this death, this cutting off,
Forgiveness, your reprieve.

Nothing makes this feel right.
For now, your bags are ready.
How about we all come instead?
For one, turns into many..

Raine Les 8/9/2008

Sadie-

No one has written my anything so beautiful. It brought tears, followed by a big smile. flowerforyou flowerforyou

I'll be in Sedona, Arizona, so come on along and we can hike in the beautiful red rock mountainsdrinker drinker



did you get the friend request? I am not on your criteria

s1owhand's photo
Sat 08/09/08 05:19 PM
(((pkd))) :heart: flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Sat 08/09/08 05:48 PM
Aww. Great Write! bigsmile


So he wasn't the one
That doesn't mean you should be done
There is another one
Who is less inclined to run

:wink: flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sat 08/09/08 05:49 PM
Sometimes a honeymoon for one can turn out to be a honeymoon with fun. You go and have a good time Pam.

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Sat 08/09/08 06:30 PM
Thanks to all my friends

Wenchflowerforyou
S1owflowerforyou
More rhyming from two great writers
Thanks Jason and Robertflowerforyou flowerforyou

Seeing my son and we will still drive to Vegas and get awesome pictures taken - even some in "the dress". Be on the look out. bigsmile drinker drinker

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 08/09/08 06:41 PM
Well heck your the winner after all your son going with you how lucky can you get. To be where it is Beautiful and with one that will give you unconditional love. bigsmile

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Sat 08/09/08 06:52 PM
:cry: :heart: LIFE and THIS PLACE(the net) we are all pawns to
believing, thinking, trying, and meeting the one who MIGHT really be the ONE!
Lift your head high as you show us and him who you are and what your about......
IF he was right,,,it would have worked.
HE was NOT your "ONE"..
So be glad YOU found out his truth, BEFORE that short walk down a
empty hearted path....:heart: flowerforyou

NICE POEM and all I can say is "YOU ARE WOMAN"!!!!!!!
So YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!!!!drinker :wink:

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Sat 08/09/08 07:13 PM

Well heck your the winner after all your son going with you how lucky can you get. To be where it is Beautiful and with one that will give you unconditional love. bigsmile


Very lucky Kristi! My son lives there now and I haven't seen him since February, so I'm curious to see how he's changed, being on his own. He sounds more grown up and I know it will be a great week. :smile:

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