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Honeymoon for One
It's been days, I'm dazed Left in a fog, dismayed Life was to change From one to two August 19, date set Trip scheduled, dress too Wedding planned, with you You changed, your mind Said things, not kind Clock stopped, unwind Didn't see it, so blind Life feels, undone Leaving now, for fun Going on my Honeymoon for one |
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thats was good
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Very interesting!
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Excellent poem!!! |
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very nice
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thanks for the comments
more therapy writing is coming I don't write as much when happy Molly 32- welcome to Mingle2 and thanks for commenting Bobby J SKPCG Mirror |
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Good things can come out of the FALLOUT...like this poem!!!!
That was really good! |
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What can I say lost for words here
If this is so he lost a good one. |
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Thanks Gams- I plan on good things coming for me
Kristi- Thanks honey, I'm doing ok |
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Idea
Life changes so quickly, And time to let go. Consoling helps so little. Well meaning, feels just so.. If I could, but, gift to you, The best to help your soul. All that it would be, Continuous love, you'd know. Past the unkind things expressed. Beyond, so you may breathe. Know this death, this cutting off, Forgiveness, your reprieve. Nothing makes this feel right. For now, your bags are ready. How about we all come instead? For one, turns into many.. Raine Les 8/9/2008 |
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Idea Life changes so quickly, And time to let go. Consoling helps so little. Well meaning, feels just so.. If I could, but, gift to you, The best to help your soul. All that it would be, Continuous love, you'd know. Past the unkind things expressed. Beyond, so you may breathe. Know this death, this cutting off, Forgiveness, your reprieve. Nothing makes this feel right. For now, your bags are ready. How about we all come instead? For one, turns into many.. Raine Les 8/9/2008 Sadie- No one has written my anything so beautiful. It brought tears, followed by a big smile. I'll be in Sedona, Arizona, so come on along and we can hike in the beautiful red rock mountains |
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Good 4 you! Keep that spirit.
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Idea Life changes so quickly, And time to let go. Consoling helps so little. Well meaning, feels just so.. If I could, but, gift to you, The best to help your soul. All that it would be, Continuous love, you'd know. Past the unkind things expressed. Beyond, so you may breathe. Know this death, this cutting off, Forgiveness, your reprieve. Nothing makes this feel right. For now, your bags are ready. How about we all come instead? For one, turns into many.. Raine Les 8/9/2008 Sadie- No one has written my anything so beautiful. It brought tears, followed by a big smile. I'll be in Sedona, Arizona, so come on along and we can hike in the beautiful red rock mountains |
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(((pkd)))
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Aww. Great Write!
So he wasn't the one That doesn't mean you should be done There is another one Who is less inclined to run |
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Sometimes a honeymoon for one can turn out to be a honeymoon with fun. You go and have a good time Pam.
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Thanks to all my friends
Wench S1ow More rhyming from two great writers Thanks Jason and Robert Seeing my son and we will still drive to Vegas and get awesome pictures taken - even some in "the dress". Be on the look out. |
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Well heck your the winner after all your son going with you how lucky can you get. To be where it is Beautiful and with one that will give you unconditional love.
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LIFE and THIS PLACE(the net) we are all pawns to
believing, thinking, trying, and meeting the one who MIGHT really be the ONE! Lift your head high as you show us and him who you are and what your about...... IF he was right,,,it would have worked. HE was NOT your "ONE".. So be glad YOU found out his truth, BEFORE that short walk down a empty hearted path.... NICE POEM and all I can say is "YOU ARE WOMAN"!!!!!!! So YOU GO GIRL!!!!!!!!! |
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Well heck your the winner after all your son going with you how lucky can you get. To be where it is Beautiful and with one that will give you unconditional love. Very lucky Kristi! My son lives there now and I haven't seen him since February, so I'm curious to see how he's changed, being on his own. He sounds more grown up and I know it will be a great week. |
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