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Topic: With The Coming Of The Rain
AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/09/08 03:47 AM
The rain came down to cleanse my sorrow away. It came just in time to help me realign life's priorities. Sometimes we walk through a maze, disoriented and afraid we have lost our way. I have not lost my way, with the coming of the rain.... JDS 08/09/08

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 08/09/08 03:53 AM
I don't recall you posting a sad poem before, i hope everything is alright AngelLight. Never the less it was a good write.

May777 Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 1238	Sat 08/09/08 03:53 AM
nature always help you find yourself,..again,.. and when it`s raining,..no one can see your tears,..

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sat 08/09/08 04:00 AM
we can find our way thru pen to paper sometimes, beautiful as always angel

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/09/08 04:03 AM
I don't recall you posting a sad poem before, i hope everything is alright AngelLight. Never the less it was a good write. It's alright baby, it's just a write about a loss...I'm fine! Ty for your caring response...

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Sat 08/09/08 04:05 AM
I don't recall you posting a sad poem before, i hope everything is alright AngelLight. Never the less it was a good write. It's alright baby, it's just a write about a loss...I'm fine! Ty for your caring response... anytime

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/09/08 04:07 AM
nature always help you find yourself,..again,.. and when it`s raining,..no one can see your tears,.. Ty May for reading and for your tender input...yes, our tears become one with nature and we fall back to the earth

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/09/08 04:09 AM
we can find our way thru pen to paper sometimes, beautiful as always angel Ty bastet....writing is a godsend...

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Sat 08/09/08 06:41 AM
With the coming of the rain We can always shed our tears, No one will that deep down We hide all our fears. But sometimes the rain It will help wash away, The things that hinder us Till the sun shines our way. Beautiful words for such a sad loss my dear. Do hope you're alright?

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 08/09/08 07:28 AM
With the coming of the rain We can always shed our tears, No one will that deep down We hide all our fears. But sometimes the rain It will help wash away, The things that hinder us Till the sun shines our way. Beautiful words for such a sad loss my dear. Do hope you're alright? Everything will be alright Robert...ty sweetie.

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Sat 08/09/08 08:22 AM
J... I hope all is well with you. J

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 08/09/08 08:34 AM
Thanks for this Angel, I'm definately feeling this poem

ddn122 Joined Mon 11/05/07 Posts: 12855	Sat 08/09/08 08:35 AM
Sometimes we walk through a maze, disoriented and afraid we have lost our way. i am glad it is only , sometimes...

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Sat 08/09/08 12:01 PM
The rain cleans our soul as does the teardrops that fall. Huggzzzs to you dear one

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Sat 08/09/08 12:20 PM
The rain came down to cleanse my sorrow away. It came just in time to help me realign life's priorities. Sometimes we walk through a maze, disoriented and afraid we have lost our way. I have not lost my way, with the coming of the rain.... JDS 08/09/08 Grey and leaden Storm clouds Grouped threateningly over my head ... A sprinkling of tears Fall from the heavens Intermingling with The rivulets Trickling down My face ... Sorrow has arrived Bringing with it A bone chilling frost ... My grieving Has has only Just begun ... Oh God! Will I ever again Feel a lightness Of spirit Or bask in the warmth of the sun? You are not alone my friend

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 08/10/08 01:01 AM
The rain came down to cleanse my sorrow away. It came just in time to help me realign life's priorities. Sometimes we walk through a maze, disoriented and afraid we have lost our way. I have not lost my way, with the coming of the rain.... JDS 08/09/08 Healing is a wonderful gift,,, Beautiful

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 08/10/08 08:34 AM
Ty (((J))) , (((Pkd))) , (((ddn))) , (((kristi))) , (((Ms Wiz))) and (((Denise))) Your warmth and kindness are heartfelt MsWiz, your write is lovely. Ty for that!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sun 08/10/08 09:52 AM
Dense Wench - I hear faith n belief in the cycles of life n nature here.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 08/10/08 02:20 PM
The rain came down to cleanse my sorrow away. It came just in time to help me realign life's priorities. Sometimes we walk through a maze, disoriented and afraid we have lost our way. I have not lost my way, with the coming of the rain.... JDS 08/09/08 WE never really lose our way. Instead it slept our minds that day. Sometimes WE just missed-placed our thought. And believed to-much in another's heart! We all have felt the cleansing of the new felt touch,wink.. Re-born anew and don't feel the blue..

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sun 08/10/08 06:43 PM
Dense Wench - I hear faith n belief in the cycles of life n nature here. Right you are DKW....Ty for reading and for your post!