Topic: The Core Of Man | |
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He is a mural,
A painting of his own liking, Brilliant bright reds and blues, A rainbow of many hues. Strong, bold, Passionate, unique, Tender in a moment, A kiss upon our cheek. We seek his strength, long for his caress, He can be weak, In love he is his best. A blazing pen, Braising our minds, With words that ignite us, With a passion that is blind. He is king of the castle, jester, a knight, A man of many colors, Who fights or takes flight, He is fatherhood, son, a lover and friend, Strong moral character He'll fight to defend for the love of his country or family, he'll go, He is the many among us, The ones that we know. Curious and courageous, Safe and dangerous, A flaming ember, Seeking our breathe Longing to be understood. He is an endless collage of colors, Brilliant and bright, Contrasting... our opposit, Both dark and light. Lured in by his core, A longing desire, Special, delicate, A raging inner fire. Complex and simple, His painting changes day by day, His inner child, Seeks to come play, He is of his own liking, A unique design, Exploring his palette, Like a fine line, Thin or wide, He stokes the fire within, By merely painting him. Upon what was a blank canvas, Now is but an infinite possibily of colors. The core of one man is like no other. SDF 8/07/08 |
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Excellent!
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Excellent! |
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If i ever live long enough to represent outwardly even half of what you wrote, i will have lived a good life! Thank you very much for the time and effort in which this masterpiece has been written.
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If i ever live long enough to represent outwardly even half of what you wrote, i will have lived a good life! Thank you very much for the time and effort in which this masterpiece has been written. [YOU ARE: infinite possibily of colors. The core of one man is like no other. YOUR ARE YOURSELF and never expected to be anyone but YOU. /quote] |
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Very well stated Myst!
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Very well stated Myst!
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Excellent! He is king of the castle, jester, a knight, A man of many colors, Who fights or takes flight, He is fatherhood, son, a lover and friend, He is that and so much more could not have put the words any more Beautiful but strong as you did!! |
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Excellent! He is king of the castle, jester, a knight, A man of many colors, Who fights or takes flight, He is fatherhood, son, a lover and friend, He is that and so much more could not have put the words any more Beautiful but strong as you did!! It means a lot coming from you Txs! Thank you! Have a great evening! |
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Your words epitomizes strength, understanding and courage, a beauteous and most fascinating write
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Edited by
Mystique42
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Thu 08/07/08 05:31 PM
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Your words epitomizes strength, understanding and courage, a beauteous and most fascinating write Thank you my dear friend! The core of a man certainly IS all of that! |
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A painted picture, vived, pure ..
Beautiful simply Beautiful as is the lovely lady |
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Thank you i enjoyed that very much
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Ahhhhhhhhh,,,PLEASE,,,stop-it!
YOU'VE been peaking into my soul,lol,lol Nive Painting,wink,lol |
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Ahhhhhhhhh,,,PLEASE,,,stop-it! YOU'VE been peaking into my soul,lol,lol Nive Painting,wink,lol Oh shucks, I've been caught peeking! |
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Ohhh think this one needs back at the top had to read it again awesome write.
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Thanks txs!
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