Topic: If you only knew
rodfcutler's photo
Fri 08/01/08 10:39 PM

If you only knew
what my heart is going through,
the master of disaster
from my constantly wanting you.

If you only knew
the happiness you bring,
every time you talk to me
you make my heart truly sing.

If you only knew
that you are my secret lover,
of which I wish I could mingle with
if it meant undercovers.

But you may never know
as my heart wades through a void,
I experience pain and suffering
feelings I just can avoid.

Just so you'll know
my feelings for you,
can only grow stronger
and therefore may last
ever so longer
blushing

RhettBBadBoy's photo
Mon 08/04/08 12:35 PM


Really reminds me of the ever brand new song (50 or 60 artists have recorded it) "You Don't Know Me" which was featured in the movie "Ray." One caveat, for both the spiritual singer and the spiritual poet, obsession without action leads to wimpdom and women don't woo wimps, at least according to the experts. However, for just plain expressing a deep emotion which may or may not become obsession . . . NICE!


rodfcutler's photo
Tue 08/05/08 08:11 AM
Thankyou Sir. Have a good day!:wink:

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 08/05/08 08:37 AM
very good indeedbigsmile