Topic: "This Life"
TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 03/13/07 11:15 AM
I awoke with no one at my side.
It’s not because of whom I’m inside.
It is not because I have not tried.
Even though I still have my pride.

I walk through this house alone.
My kids have moved and are grown.
They still call me on the phone.
Now they have lives of there own.

I have started to make new friends.
As time goes by we make amends.
Life has no guarantees when it ends.
At times it just depends.

At times it seems as if life has just begun.
I can now take the time to enjoy the sun.
Take the time to have some fun.
The trials of raising my kids are done.

I have nothing to hold me down.
I can run around.
Go to town.
Or sit and drink my Crown.

This life is now all mine.
I can go out when I want to and dine.
I’m learning to shine.
This life to me is just fine.

Thndrghost's photo
Tue 03/13/07 11:17 AM
very beautiful flowerforyou

Greyhound's photo
Tue 03/13/07 11:22 AM
This was very nice. Kinda reminds me of me sometimes.flowerforyou

Katie371's photo
Tue 03/13/07 12:26 PM
good mix of rhyme and meaning

buttons's photo
Tue 03/13/07 01:52 PM
wow tx your poems are getting soooo good! that was great! ans so true
really enjoyed this one:smile: ...deb

Morena350's photo
Wed 03/14/07 04:25 PM
yep better and better
flowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 03/17/07 11:33 AM
Awww ya are great thanks for reading!bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sat 03/17/07 11:37 AM
MS Txs,,, Incredible as always
A Nice Glimpse into your life,,,flowerforyou
I agree your Poems are Incredible and written
from your Heart....:heart: flowerforyou :heart:

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 03/17/07 07:56 PM
Awwwww txs...
How fitting that I am jsut now reading this one???
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...
Very Good, maybe I will learn to walk around
and enjoy my empty house one of these days...
but for tonight,
I MISS 'em like crazy!!!
Yes, they drive me crazy,
but i miss 'em.......:wink:

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 03/17/07 08:33 PM
Great poem Txs, Glad to the family that still keeps in touch.

bigsmile

G

Oceanladysea's photo
Sat 03/17/07 08:53 PM
Keep it up girl. The more you write the more you will want to write. And
don't be surprised if you find your style changing over time. It's a
good thing, don't be afraid of it.

karmafury's photo
Sun 03/18/07 06:03 AM
Another great one Txs.

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 03/21/07 04:59 PM
Thanks everyone, yeah SCG when they grow up and leave it does make it
lonely a tad bigsmile but hey now its time for me to play. Just
cherish the time you have with them while they are young. Again thank
you all for reading bigsmile

iceprincess's photo
Wed 03/21/07 05:03 PM
that was great girl and i loved reading it

klugman's photo
Wed 03/21/07 06:22 PM
Very nice

madline123's photo
Wed 03/21/07 06:22 PM
ah the life is a lıke poem.when you read them sometıme make you sad
sometıme make you happy