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I awoke with no one at my side.
It’s not because of whom I’m inside. It is not because I have not tried. Even though I still have my pride. I walk through this house alone. My kids have moved and are grown. They still call me on the phone. Now they have lives of there own. I have started to make new friends. As time goes by we make amends. Life has no guarantees when it ends. At times it just depends. At times it seems as if life has just begun. I can now take the time to enjoy the sun. Take the time to have some fun. The trials of raising my kids are done. I have nothing to hold me down. I can run around. Go to town. Or sit and drink my Crown. This life is now all mine. I can go out when I want to and dine. I’m learning to shine. This life to me is just fine. |
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very beautiful
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This was very nice. Kinda reminds me of me sometimes.
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good mix of rhyme and meaning
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wow tx your poems are getting soooo good! that was great! ans so true
really enjoyed this one ...deb |
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yep better and better
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Awww ya are great thanks for reading!
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MS Txs,,, Incredible as always
A Nice Glimpse into your life,,, I agree your Poems are Incredible and written from your Heart.... |
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Awwwww txs...
How fitting that I am jsut now reading this one??? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... Very Good, maybe I will learn to walk around and enjoy my empty house one of these days... but for tonight, I MISS 'em like crazy!!! Yes, they drive me crazy, but i miss 'em....... |
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Great poem Txs, Glad to the family that still keeps in touch.
G |
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Keep it up girl. The more you write the more you will want to write. And
don't be surprised if you find your style changing over time. It's a good thing, don't be afraid of it. |
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Another great one Txs.
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Thanks everyone, yeah SCG when they grow up and leave it does make it
lonely a tad but hey now its time for me to play. Just cherish the time you have with them while they are young. Again thank you all for reading |
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that was great girl and i loved reading it
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Very nice
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ah the life is a lıke poem.when you read them sometıme make you sad
sometıme make you happy |
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