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Topic: Disrespect
luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 07:12 PM
Why did you hurt me, with that word? The one you said, but never heard. I felt so sad, filled with disgrace, I felt like you slapped me, right in my face. Im in such pain, from disrespect, so much dishonor, so much reject. To walk away, will break my heart, to take abuse, must never start. I stand tall, I will not fall, I love myself, the most of all. by~Roberta Murdock~

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Thu 07/31/08 07:13 PM
cool

PedroHeartsYou Joined Sat 01/12/08 Posts: 87	Thu 07/31/08 07:13 PM
I like the last two lines. Great poem. keep up the writinggg.

Kleisto Joined Tue 05/13/08 Posts: 5704	Thu 07/31/08 07:13 PM
Good write, are you ok??

RJR1 Joined Fri 02/22/08 Posts: 548	Thu 07/31/08 07:14 PM
Good for you! Great! I felt it.

msmyka Joined Sat 03/22/08 Posts: 17079	Thu 07/31/08 07:15 PM


MisKim323 Joined Sat 06/28/08 Posts: 14563	Thu 07/31/08 07:18 PM


inleyes Joined Tue 06/03/08 Posts: 9	Thu 07/31/08 07:28 PM
Powerful, strong-willed, well spoken/writen ... Women that just won't take it.. good for you. Beautiful ending...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 07/31/08 07:35 PM
Great ending...good for you!! You can accomplish anything with self-love, self-compassion

luv2roknroll Joined Sun 07/06/08 Posts: 30367	Thu 07/31/08 07:38 PM
Good write, are you ok?? Never better, these are older poems of mine sweety, but ty.

rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Thu 07/31/08 07:40 PM
That was wonderful.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Thu 07/31/08 07:45 PM
good write luv2rocknroll

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Fri 08/01/08 08:21 AM
great write

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