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Topic: Selfish Desparation
GCLIFE Joined Mon 10/01/07 Posts: 8013	Tue 07/29/08 08:17 AM
In a moment his life shall cease Closure without a view Lonely final minutes Lonely without you Never meant to be so fortunate But fortune he was due Held on to aspirations Let go when he lost you His ending shall not be discovered Routine embedded lies Days will pass through sunset eyes Days he used to cry So finalize this selfish state Crimes without the clue Time to close the curtains Time spent thinking of you

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Tue 07/29/08 08:18 AM
interesting

massachusetts Joined Fri 11/16/07 Posts: 451	Tue 07/29/08 08:38 AM
like that sesemea street picture

massachusetts Joined Fri 11/16/07 Posts: 451	Tue 07/29/08 08:40 AM
loved that writing

SKPCG Joined Mon 03/03/08 Posts: 14708	Tue 07/29/08 08:42 AM
That was very good!! Thank you!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/29/08 10:35 AM


Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Tue 07/29/08 11:22 AM
In a moment his life shall cease Closure without a view Lonely final minutes Lonely without you Never meant to be so fortunate But fortune he was due Held on to aspirations Let go when he lost you His ending shall not be discovered Routine embedded lies Days will pass through sunset eyes Days he used to cry So finalize this selfish state Crimes without the clue Time to close the curtains Time spent thinking of you loss, separation..deeply felt and agonized this is heart wrenching..beautiful

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Tue 07/29/08 11:25 AM
Nice flow.

ChelleBelle Joined Sun 07/15/07 Posts: 22893	Tue 07/29/08 11:47 AM
beautifully written

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Tue 07/29/08 12:00 PM
It sounds like YOU were able to be present, in more ways than one....and, presence is everything....it is gift

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