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Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 07/22/08 07:46 PM
I miss walking in the sand, with that special someone hand and hand under the moon and the star lit sky, feeling the passion in each others eyes. But yet i'm afraid... I miss that warm sensation of loves kiss laughing and playing as if we were kids. bring-ing home flowers for no reason why goose pimples rising as i'm kissing her thighs. But yet i'm afraid... I miss coming home to loves full house the tender yearning while undoing a blouse. making passionate love till the brake of dawn our bodys needing rest but our souls pushing on But yet i'm afraid... I'm afraid of going insane, because i'm being torn apart the last 10 yrs of marrage really scared my heart afraid to even ask to be friends, they say that time heals, but time never ends W.A.M 7/22/08

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Tue 07/22/08 07:47 PM


Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Tue 07/22/08 07:55 PM
thank you your very kind

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/22/08 08:04 PM
I miss walking in the sand, with that special someone hand and hand under the moon and the star lit sky, feeling the passion in each others eyes. But yet i'm afraid... I miss that warm sensation of loves kiss laughing and playing as if we were kids. bring-ing home flowers for no reason why goose pimples rising as i'm kissing her thighs. But yet i'm afraid... I miss coming home to loves full house the tender yearning while undoing a blouse. making passionate love till the brake of dawn our bodys needing rest but our souls pushing on But yet i'm afraid... I'm afraid of going insane, because i'm being torn apart the last 10 yrs of marrage really scared my heart afraid to even ask to be friends, they say that time heals, but time never ends W.A.M 7/22/08 Breathe,, Yes now Exhaleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,, Good .. Let the past be gone,, see the light as the moon shines upon your soul,, its there where your heart shall sing and all shall hear the music through your Eyes,, Healing shall begin,, forward one must go,,, remember the good and listen with the Eyes... Beautiful as always

starlynsangel Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 729	Wed 07/23/08 06:53 AM


AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 07/23/08 07:04 AM
Let yourself feel what you feel, yet know that the only thing that really exists is Love. Love will always overcome fear, always. Ty for sharing such a fragile part of your humanity. Yet in your humanity, I sense a great strength, a great resiliency. You will overcome, with Love. Keep faith

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Wed 07/23/08 08:15 AM
From the heart!! Great write!!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 07/23/08 02:52 PM
Wow! Definetely feeling this one! Very GOOD!

Winx Joined Fri 08/31/07 Posts: 39051	Wed 07/23/08 03:51 PM
thank you your very kind You're welcome. It is a good write that many can relate to.

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:32 PM
I miss walking in the sand, with that special someone hand and hand under the moon and the star lit sky, feeling the passion in each others eyes. But yet i'm afraid... I miss that warm sensation of loves kiss laughing and playing as if we were kids. bring-ing home flowers for no reason why goose pimples rising as i'm kissing her thighs. But yet i'm afraid... I miss coming home to loves full house the tender yearning while undoing a blouse. making passionate love till the brake of dawn our bodys needing rest but our souls pushing on But yet i'm afraid... I'm afraid of going insane, because i'm being torn apart the last 10 yrs of marrage really scared my heart afraid to even ask to be friends, they say that time heals, but time never ends W.A.M 7/22/08 Breathe,, Yes now Exhaleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,, Good .. Let the past be gone,, see the light as the moon shines upon your soul,, its there where your heart shall sing and all shall hear the music through your Eyes,, Healing shall begin,, forward one must go,,, remember the good and listen with the Eyes... Beautiful as always Wow thank you that was beautiful!

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:34 PM
thank you

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:37 PM
Let yourself feel what you feel, yet know that the only thing that really exists is Love. Love will always overcome fear, always. Ty for sharing such a fragile part of your humanity. Yet in your humanity, I sense a great strength, a great resiliency. You will overcome, with Love. Keep faith Thank you AngelLight beautiful thoughts of encouragement

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:42 PM
From the heart!! Great write!! I love that picture, i sit and watch the pair of eagles that nest near my house everyday! God they're magnificant birds. Thank you for your exellent review

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:44 PM
Wow! Definetely feeling this one! Very GOOD! Thanks d4tc i'm glad you liked it

Unknow Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 1972	Wed 07/23/08 07:46 PM
Thanks to all of you you don't know how happy you made me. ( of joy)

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 07/24/08 08:38 AM
Love this piece Bill!!!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 07/25/08 05:07 PM
Good write! Now exhale and breath in slowly...