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Topic: Should Have Done My Hair
Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Tue 07/15/08 10:25 AM
Should have done my hair Battered and bruised heart totally used Should have done my hair Hit the ground without a sound Should have done my hair Glass and broom another hospital room Should have done my hair Another police report swollen mouthed retort Should have done my hair Mom's on phone you're all alone Should have done my hair Final law suit you friggin brute Should have done my hair Now you see can't have me Should have done my hair See him stare now I care Should have done my hair Know that man yes I can Should have done my hair

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Tue 07/15/08 10:48 AM
nice

Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Tue 07/15/08 10:49 AM
Thanks (((Jimmy)))

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 07/15/08 11:30 AM


Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Tue 07/15/08 11:31 AM
That is how I felt!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 07/15/08 11:49 AM
hugs good write

Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Tue 07/15/08 11:51 AM
{{{{{hugs}}}}} back and good to see you!!

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 07/15/08 12:05 PM
May this write hit home so the fists no longer do.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Tue 07/15/08 12:08 PM
A painted picture Pure and so heart felt Yessssssssssssssssssss Outstanding

mteagle31 Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Tue 07/15/08 12:13 PM
Final law suit you friggin brute Now that's the way to HIT back!!!!!!!!!!!! Well done!!!!!! <<<<< For your brusied heart!!!

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Tue 07/15/08 03:38 PM
Should have done your hair life is never fair But you have the flair to write the prose and share now you have done your hair it is very nice Blurple I hope you will come back to this posts and read

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 07/16/08 12:16 AM
Did you do something with your hair besides color it? That was cute, just remember to lather, rinse, repeat.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Wed 07/16/08 08:53 AM
Visually strong writing needed for a very horrendous act. Wonderful job.

No1sLove Joined Wed 04/16/08 Posts: 10342	Wed 07/16/08 08:56 AM
Poignant! Very well done indeed!

Blurple Joined Mon 06/30/08 Posts: 76	Fri 07/18/08 09:38 AM
((((HUGGINS)))) Many thanks to all of you that read and posted and those that just read as well!!! This was hard to post but it had to be said...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/18/08 11:33 AM
Excellent write. Crystal clear, palpable, immediate, direct, tragic, human

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