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My little Spanish feather...
Why are you still single? I write to you to make your heart beat fast and to make you feel that tingle. I hope you write to me on occasion and I hope to grow closer to you for us. Your lips must be as soft as a peach... Kissing them slowly- for me it is a must. To feel your arms around me and your legs straddled around my waist would make me desire you even more as for all of your love... I long to taste. My little Spanish feather... you are so sweet and sincere, even though you live very close to me- you are here to lend me your ear. I long to run my fingers through your shiny black hair... hoping that you will know that I am more than just a teddy bear. My love runs very deep... once I am in love; but to start a friendship first with you- I will have to thank the one above. Let us go with the flow and take one step at a time. Sooner or later my little Spanish feather, I hope that you will eternally be mine. Marcas B. Sterling Dec. 4, 2003 |
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This one is very good...
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You have very good words, and your work is wonderful
but if you post them one at the time, will give all of the poems lovers time to really enjoy your wonk, one or 2 a day will be very effective and people will appreciate your hard work better you are an excellent writer keep it up,,,love this one!! |
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This one is Awesome very good
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very sweet
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Very, very good.
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<clap!clap!clap!> |
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Thanks to all for your support.
I apologize to any readers, poets, moderators for remembering that rule (to list) them all. Sorry. Please forgive me. I have had a lot of poetry that I threw away, burnt, stolen (like from an old ex-g/f in 2001)... and so, I do get inspired to write sometimes. I haven't been for awhile for some reasons, but when I do start writing, please remember that most of my poetry is NOT about the "lovey-dovey"/romantic things. Most of it is or could be controversial, to raise awareness (for instance- Janet Reno's order to proceed with the demolition and burning of the Branch Davidian- which killed... nevermind). Sorry- started on a ramble there. I could really go off on that one ('freedom of religion' thing, leading to the Oklahoma City... there I go again). I thank everyone for being tolerant of my poetry- even if you don't agree with it. It's meant to have some sort of positive influence at least. A couple of my favorites have been "Quiet Parks" and "A Common Quietness". Of course, I have a few that are great, and some not so great- if not bad. There are many poets among us. Much love to you all. Marcas |
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Hi!
This one was good... it shows us just how romantic, sincere and loving you are! I can't wait to read the other ones! Will you be writting a poem about me?! lol jk! |
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