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Topic: A Child's Tears
LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/11/08 12:36 PM
Words used harsh, hurtful.. Damaging state of mind I am Beautiful she cries softly within her mind Hit me that’s makes you a Man Walk away she Yell’s Shiittt on Life Bound to scars, bound to rage, shell of armor broken. Walk away ,,, I am Beautiful she cries softly within her mind….. Child abuse in any shape and form must stop,,, Children are our Future,,, One must learn to guide Love, and Respect ,,,,

myanimalcracker Joined Wed 02/27/08 Posts: 900	Fri 07/11/08 12:41 PM
((((LAMom))))

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 07/11/08 12:50 PM Edited by Unknow on Fri 07/11/08 12:51 PM
Child abuse in any shape and form must stop,,, Children are our Future,,, One must learn to guide Love, and Respect ,,,, Amen Mom, Couldn't of said it any better!!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/11/08 12:51 PM
((((LAMom)))) from my heart to yours ty ((( Marc )))) Thank you,, Deeply touched

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Fri 07/11/08 01:25 PM
There's simply no excuse for abuse. Not in my book. The poor defenseless children can't hit back, so if you want to hit on someone come this way, I have something for ya. Be a man or a woman and stand up to someone your own size. Oh Dee, I am so behind you on this issue.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Fri 07/11/08 01:40 PM Edited by AngelLight on Fri 07/11/08 01:41 PM
"I am Beautiful she cries softly within her mind" THAT is so beautifully written Denise Ty for your write....

Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Fri 07/11/08 01:58 PM
There's simply no excuse for abuse. Not in my book. The poor defenseless children can't hit back, so if you want to hit on someone come this way, I have something for ya. Be a man or a woman and stand up to someone your own size. Oh Dee, I am so behind you on this issue. No my friend.... It's a Learned Behavior that has to be conciously replaced with better behaviors!!!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Fri 07/11/08 02:11 PM
Words spoken so true, it breaks my heart anytime I hear of a child that has been abused. They should be loved not shoved.

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Fri 07/11/08 04:35 PM
sweetheart, cry with me j

TwilightsTwin Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 11054	Fri 07/11/08 04:39 PM


bigblue29 Joined Fri 03/07/08 Posts: 709	Fri 07/11/08 05:34 PM
Mom....the guys and i at work read everyday about such things and it fires us up! We all have children and i tell you the man or women that hits a child in front of any of us will wear the mistake forever! God and i can have a sit down about It when i die.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 07/11/08 06:59 PM
My Love to all,,,, Listen with an open heart See within the Soul Ed-Ucate,,,, One Helping hand becomes two and three and so on an so on

CantonGal Joined Thu 07/10/08 Posts: 124	Fri 07/11/08 10:19 PM
Very touching!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Fri 07/11/08 11:04 PM
La Mom Child Abuse

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 07/13/08 01:19 PM
From my Heart to all of yours,,, Thank you.....

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 07/13/08 01:49 PM
If WE as a people can't see the damage that ANY ABUSE CAUSES we will all PARISH with-in our own TOMBS OF HELL! Life and living MEANS to respect everything and to use our essence as a guiding hand to ALL who we can help. And CHILDREN our GOD'S most beautiful GIFT to US ALL, and THEY NEED ALL-OF-US TO WATCH OVER THEM AND TO PROTECT THEM FROM ANYONE'S HARM,,,ANYONE'S!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU for your poem and message to us all that WE NEED TO BE RESPONSIBLE for protecting ALL CHILDREN and PEOPLE who MIGHT BE SUFFERING ABUSE! SEE,,,,,WATCH,,,and CALL the POLICE if YOU FEEL ANYONE is being ABUSIVE to ANOTHER! And CHILDREN NEED ALL OF THE EYES THEY CAN HAVE TO PROTECT THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 07/14/08 05:26 PM
No excuse for abuse... ((((Denise))))