Topic: Poet
myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:19 AM
The prince raised his finger
And pointed.
“You, poet!
Write me a poem!”
So the poet bowed his head,
And obliged to do so.
He crafted and weaved
His language.
He spun magic of gardens and forests
Suns and moons,
Stars and bright city lights.
Of heated dancing,
In summer nights,
Of the ocean,
Of God,
Of love.
he painted a scene in the air
Of brilliance
And colours never before seen.

He presented his gift.
But the king tapped his foot.
“This will not do;
I asked you to write me a poem
So write a poem about me!”
He pointed his finger
And sent him away,
So the poet obliged to do so.
He bowed his head,
And worked without rest.
He created an epic ballad,
A mastery,
A song,
He moved the words with his hands
As gentle as a shepherd.
The story was of a wasp,
His journeys and triumphs,
His greatness, cruelty,
And a single two lines
Told of his songbird,
The one he killed.
It was a feast of glorious verse.

He presneted his gift.
But the old man tapped his foot.
“This will not do;
I commanded for a great poem,
A poem about me.
This is a faerie story;
Some piffle about a puny insect,
And a bird.”
And he pointed his finger.

“And least you noticed the bird,”
said the poet,
Shaking his head.
And it was promptly cut off.

s1owhand's photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:21 AM
bigsmile

"i like that"

no photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:25 AM
Well said.

Redsoxfan1's photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:43 AM
Well done!!flowers I like that!!

mteagle31's photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:46 AM
flowers

d4tc's photo
Fri 07/11/08 10:51 AM
laugh

Nice. flowerforyou

EvyT's photo
Fri 07/11/08 11:05 AM
This is more like prose....very creative writing~

AngelLight's photo
Fri 07/11/08 11:15 AM
Very unique flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Fri 07/11/08 12:36 PM
enjoyed this tremendously!

Sharris's photo
Fri 07/11/08 12:44 PM
"at least you remembered the bird"

tremendous life application...shivers..wonderful piece.

myanimalcracker's photo
Fri 07/11/08 01:14 PM
((((s1ow, John, Red, mteagle, Jason, Evy, Angel, jimz, Sharris))))

Thank you so much for your responses flowers flowers flowers

AngelLight's photo
Fri 07/11/08 01:18 PM
You're so welcome sweetheart....