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From the deepest dregs
The memories come Fateful and prophetic They are none Dark and fear Seem my Only friends I lay and cry Deepest feelings They plague me so Mistakes plague my mind Happiness gone for now Love a gift I have declined Fear takes over me I can only Lay and cry |
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Names the poem.....
Deepest Me |
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Beautiful Poem!
Nice Title ((Tneal))  
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don't name somebody else's poem.
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Thanks and that is a good title
You all are always so kind
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She doesn't have to accept the title.... just a suggestion.
and Hello to you PIFF |
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it's ok piffs, I don't mind, Smile
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Beautifully written Creationsfire. Tneal's idea is a good one.
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It was very well written. I could not help but give you a suggeston of
a title.... |
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Thanks,
 isn't it weird how poems can reflect our feelings, hearts and souls. Just at any moment. Go from dark to light, sad or happy in a flash of memories or experiences or just ideas......poetry is a gift we all share. |
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yeppers
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very good one
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Yes T that is a very Good Title for a very good Piece.
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Very good and named well,wink. Keep them coming girl!!!  
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