Topic: Flight Of Phoenix
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Mon 02/26/07 07:52 AM
From the fire I rise
Leaving behind cinders and ashes
My wings flaming as I streak across the night sky
My cries piercing mortal ears
Making them bleed and weep
My back arched as I give one final scream
Waking the dead from their dreams
So high above the land I plummet
Racing faster and faster toward the ground
Making no sound
Until I slam into the dirt
Sickening crunch of bones
Blood spattering and splattering the dry dusty dirt
Quickly it seeps into the thirsty ground
My remains turning to dust
As if I never was....

venusrose's photo
Mon 02/26/07 08:01 AM
I am in awe of your writing ability. Awesome Poet!flowerforyou

Hotchikita's photo
Mon 02/26/07 08:12 AM
An other beautiful one ((Poet)). I love waking to your work.

flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Mon 02/26/07 04:33 PM
whoa--that was really good writin'--

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:07 PM
Awesome g/f ya on a roll. bigsmile

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:09 PM
Great one Poet.

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:10 PM
Incredible as always flowerforyou

Stephycats's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:17 PM
wow

herewego's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:29 PM
such a beautiful poem

lionsbrew's photo
Mon 02/26/07 05:35 PM
nice sis very nice.

Gryphyn's photo
Mon 02/26/07 11:20 PM
What a nice piece to read when I come home. Thank you Poet. Flying into
the future is the only way to go.

flowerforyou

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